Kinga

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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2009-09-12 1:50]

Hello Olgierd,
You were lucky to have a model with a certain aura, but two things are bothering me here:
- the look in her eyes, that is too neutral too me, as if she was just trying to avoid to look into your lense. I think this is a matter of timing. Some seconds later or earlier and you would have nailed a more "meaningful" look;
- the partial cropping of her hands, that seem to adopt positions that could reinforce expressiveness of your model's pose. A pity you did not include them entirely.
Good light management and depth of field though.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• rminkow (15491)
• [2009-09-12 6:10]

Hi Olgierd..nice shot...well composed..nice light and details.

Roger