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wedding day p. XI


wedding day p. XI
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Copyright: Piotr Gajewski (simozaur) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 0] (718)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06-18
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D200
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-11 15:04
Viewed: 324
Points: 4
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you are my world :)
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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 175 W: 3 N: 97] (1877)
  • [2006-07-11 22:15]

Hello Piotr,
Nice tones of the B/W, very good on details and nice feel to the shot. I am not so sure about the composition, because most of the space in the shot is devoid of details (But that's of course a my very personal opinion). It is good as an experiment though(i've seen in your profile that you've been focussing on similar shots :-))the shot itelf is good. i see that you've used D200 with good results, hoping to pick one for myself sometime soon. bye.

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 37 N: 105] (867)
  • [2006-07-12 13:05]

b&w is beautiful here. framing as well. composition... well, i would have included both persons a bit more in the frame. there's too much space around empty IMO, however... well, main focus here is probably on the close looking into each other's eyes not other things.
anyhow - a beautiful and, i believe, happy couple!
nice experiment
and thanks for sharing!
laine

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