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Copyright: Lech Basel (LeHo) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 1 N: 2] (2763)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-06
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50/1.4
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-06 15:36
Viewed: 369
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
my first portrait-session wit the women and d80 :)
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  • Great 
  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 160 W: 4 N: 38] (447)
  • [2008-07-06 15:47]

Great job here, and both model and equipment have performed admirably. Beautiful skin texture, excellent use of the blue frame as a prop, very good focus and expression. Overall, it's a great portrait and I can't suggest any improvements.

ciao Lech..
what a beauty.. it`s so nice!! perfect combination of colours.. wonderful details.. with a perfect play of light!! thanks
ciao Marco

O boy! I love that hair against the blue door.. and how it matches her eyes. Great composition.. Although her neck looks a tad akward, not sure why.

Hi Lech,

She is beautiful. Her red hair, blue eyes, are complimented by the door frame and black background. If this is your first, I can't wait to see more. Great job!

Lisa

Hi Lech,

Excellent color combination. Well focused and good use of the light!
TFS

Regards,
Plamen

very nice composition.. congratulations!!

a very lovely portrait.
your colors are excellent, very bright & clear.
the color of her hair, eyes and lips all compliment each other.
just a wonderful photo.
well done.
y2koSan

Sweet portrait of a beautiful model Lech.

You are presenting her beauty in a wonderful way. Lovely colors and light. I am not sure if it would have been better with a larger DOF to have her hand clear instead of out of focus.I find the hand is a bit distractive but nothing serious. But honestly , we look naturally at her eyes first (^_^) .
Well done !
Robert

  • Great 
  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1486 W: 117 N: 2357] (9011)
  • [2008-07-06 17:46]

Very nicely captured portrait with a lovely model. Well chosen location and very good light control.

The lens has shallow DOF and part of the face is blur yet still a good portrait. The hand in blur is just a little distractive, IMO.

Very good pose, and well done. I like it

tfs, bill

nice! great compo and contrast of colors, beautiful eyes.

great job

Hi Lech,

The focus on the eyes is fantastic. I also love the red hear next to the blue doorframe(?).

I do find the hand a little bit distracting, maybe if it was not as light it would work better.

Well done!

Hi Lech....this is fantastic...great shot..wonderful color, details, composition..this shot has it all...congratulations.

Roger

  • Good 
  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 279 W: 36 N: 377] (1453)
  • [2008-07-06 21:08]

What a wonderful display of all soft and contrasting, yet complimentary colors.
Good lighting, okay depth of field and nice placement and overall composition.
I do think, however, the whole thing might have been even stronger had all of her hand been in focus. Somehow this way, to me, it looks large and a bit out of place; maybe even 2 of the 4 fingers.
Still, it's a beautiful shot.
Thanks for sharing.
Wilt

Classial lovely portrait.

Boa noite Lech

Beautiful portrait, Very well done and atractive.

My regards

Teresat

fantastic picture
the crop, the colours, the perspective and the expression
Karl

beautiful, Cute Great job :)

Wondweful lighting ;contrast and sweet DOF! Awesome portrait image!
Regards,

chiping

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