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The pose looks uncomfortable and unnatural, the legs are poorly cropped and the focus isn;t on her face, where it probably should be.
I'm afraid I have to agree with Richard, Olgierd. This photo is not up to your usual quality. Hazy colours, weak contrasts, focus problems and, of course, a rather uncomfortable pose of your model.
However, this setting with the bended tree has some potential. Why not get back there and try other poses and photographical parameters?
Of course, this is only my personal opinion. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o)
TFS & kind regards,
Erik
Very nice model! Like the tattoo.
834 photos posted and only 5 critiques of other photographer's work. I think that's fairly poor to be honest. Neither do you reply to helpful critiques of your images..
Do you think that this is how it works on TL?
As to this photo - very uncomfortable looking girl!
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eh si il mio caro amico Richard ha ragione come sempre!
Lui è un grande e la tua modella ha una posa innaturale e le gambe sono miseramente tagliate e la faccia è fuori fuoco.
da rifare!
Anda