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Passing By


Passing By
Photo Information
Copyright: Tomasz Kazimierczak (btokaz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1061 W: 130 N: 167] (5744)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-22
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Nikon D50, Nikkor 70-300mm AF-G
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Railway Lines, 100 points or more !, Mood from the railway system, Elfik favorites, Points forgotten [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-22 18:31
Viewed: 1219
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 124
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi. This is photo with no PP, only cropped, a bit contrast add and framed. Sunset. I like the light. Please give me a title, I dont know...

Tomasz

PS
Thank you for all comments, kind words and for sugestion about the title. I like idea of Vlad (pozaru) - "Dont look back" with little change
Thanks, thanks, thanks...

No. I changed my decision.
The Oscar goes to... Surfacing with "Passing By" thank you Marek!

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the photo is so beautiful Tomasz....
I even think it does not need a title.....but wjat about Duet? or something related to that:)

yes tomazs yes!

Superb photograph Tomasz. The mood and light is fantastic.
well done. How about "Journey"

ˇvery good!
Amazing lines, atmosfere and light.
Very well done.
Regards.
Jacobo

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5117)
  • [2006-05-22 19:12]
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No pp? Yaycks, hat down then ...

Title?
Misty curves
Telegraph road


A.

Hi Tomasz! Great mood captured in this photo, I also think that it doesn't needs a title... nevertheless I'm going to leave my suggestion, what about if it was, "Light my way"
Raul

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  • nsrq Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-05-22 20:26]
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Hi Tomasz
Fantastic shot! I'm surprised it didn't need and pp! Good work, great light. As for the title, how about simply 'S'?
Thanks for sharing
Nilton

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  • Texan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 520 W: 49 N: 1] (22)
  • [2006-05-22 21:09]
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just could hav ebeen a little bit sharpter I would have cranked the fstop to about f22 and done at 1/125 tha would have allowed a whole lot more detail which in this case would hav emade this shot much better.

I'll think of a title after I'm finished staring at it...:) It's wonderful. Love the light.

As for a title..."Track trekking"...a suggestion :)

Pozdrawiam serdecznie,

Nathalie

Title: into the sunset.

And as a sunset photograph, it's great - because it avoids the cliches. There is something mesmerising about railway lines, and the ominous shape of the carriages to the left adds mood to the photo. Fantastic composition, a great telephoto effect. Congratulations.

Superb example of square composition and liner perspective.

hi tomasz,
great composition and mood here. like the presence of the train and the sunset scene.

i may call it "express"

tfs.
jeff

Leading lines, mysterious, and scary? Many thanks for sharing, cheers to you-JEFFREY

Hi Tomasz.

We all love trains...where they are going....where they have come from. These tracks makes my mind wander to whee i have been and am going.....very indepth. life feel, welldone and thanx for the feels.

Stv

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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2006-05-23 3:41]
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The composition is really good and it creates a very strong mood. If I were to give a title, I'll call it "The Long and Winding Track". TFS.

Konie

Absolutely beautiful, Tomasz !

v
ps."Don't look back"

I also tried the whole train rail thing, but mine didn't come out this nice. Love the composition

Hi Tomasz
Very nice composition. Beautiful light and sun rays.
Good capture. Well done.

Kerem

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  • elkab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 72 W: 51 N: 41] (739)
  • [2006-05-23 6:34]
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Witaj!
Dobre to, co do ramy tylko nie jestem przekonana, ale kadr świetny i te błyski, jak żywe.

pozdrawiam
eb

What a wonderful mood, so mysterious. Fantastic light, colours, and...frame ;D
bravo, Tomasz!
M.

you captured the beautiful atmosphere, another poetic image, good comp, yes... when it ALL comes together...thanx, M, (*_*)

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3285 W: 785 N: 4392] (19736)
  • [2006-05-23 11:38]
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Hi Tomasz,
Leaving in train is always made under the sign of nostalgia. It could be your title. Excellent composition and atmosphere. I like sepia and your framing very class. Well done! Annie

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5400)
  • [2006-05-23 12:05]
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Hi Tomasz
Nice composition. Like the lights on railway. Good colours and DOF.
Well done

osse

hello tomasz!
wonderful photo,good light control and colors. excellent!
zoran

Amazing shot Tomasz.
The photo says: Just follow the light, it will take you somewhere....

Great capture again..

Congratulations!

Pelin

Czesc Tomku,
to znowu ja. Sam nie wiem, czy Secret S., czy to bardziej mnie rusza. chyba ciezko porownac. Spoznilem sie na konkurs nt. tytulu, jednak podam swoj: "Passing by". Urzeka mnie tutaj perspektywa (EXIF dla tego zdjecia najwyrazniej lze jak pies...) i wlasnie to, ze te tory (jakby byly zywe...) omijaja stojacy, pokazany tylko fragmentarycznie, drugorzedny sklad jakiegos pociagu (no nie mow, ze to byl jakis plot - wyglada jak towarowiec....) :-) Podoba mi sie ta pracka - nawet bardzo podoba!

Marek

Great shot, good perspective and mood. Sergio

Hello Tomasz, this is a stunner! So nice and natural as you wrote!

One of the best rail tracks I've seen.

I love the tone and the fog. Good low pov.

Great work! Cheers, Yan :)

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-05-24 4:17]
  • [+]

Hi Tomasz, Nice graphism & great crop to emphasis "S" shape in composition. Greatly observed!

Wong

Swietne swiatlo. Ladnie kadr ulozyles. Zrobil sie niezly klimat z tego. Bardzo mi sie podoba...tym bardziej,ze lubie kolejowa tematyke :)

Very nicely done, Tomasz. I really like the light on the rail that makes them shine and the colours you got are amazing. Very dynamic composition. Excellent!

Good shot, Tomasz. Very arty.
Jan

Wonderful railway shot! I love the mood and the tones here.
I added to my theme, hoping you dont mind.

TFS

Marco

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  • shana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 203 W: 57 N: 140] (1851)
  • [2006-05-25 6:16]
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Hi Tomasz,
VEry nice POV and placement of the rails is very very nice.Great shot .
Regerds
Senay

this little fog, add some sadness, memories, strong compo and shot!
smiletomorrow

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2006-05-25 7:03]
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very good capture of this " curve " Tomasz..leading the eye into the picture !

Leon

swietnie pokazane :) podoba sie bardzo

Exceptional vintage feel for numeric. Great lines.

Ben.

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1468 W: 10 N: 734] (10688)
  • [2006-05-25 21:48]
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Hi Tomasz,
Superb photo. The mood and the atmosphere is unbelievable.
Sunil

Mood
Lines
Atmosphere
Great composition in form, lines and colour
Superb
RuudBlok

Hi Tomasz, great capture, great compo. Fantastic image.

Marleen

Hi Tomasz,
This is superb, I like this great mood with the fog and the sepia tones. The rail way is leading us thru this great composition with awesome lighting. Very well done.
Luc

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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2006-05-27 0:24]

Last days you were publishing very good works. This image is beatiful (I love trains, and this is a point for my opinion). With less light and black and white I think It would be better... well, i'm notr sure.

Enric.

Nice curves and mood captured here Tomasz.
Very well seen and captured. A trip back in time ! These railcars seems to be so old, and this light. Looks like we are back in the 40's....
Cheers!
Robert

Hi Tomasz
Nice intresting photo, but you as a professional lost
the lead-in line a little ^_^. I did a WS. Good Sunday
bye ; John T

I don't think there is much left to say, all the previous members have covered everything about this fantastic shot! I just want to add that you have the talent to spot a great photo, and make it happen in a masterful way.
Vassilis

this is POSTER stuff! very well done Tomasz, I fear you've moved to another dimension/ level with this fantastic composition

congrats again

jaco

Ahoj Tomasz,

I like this photo very much, you have captured beautiful atmosphere here...great, really...and I think the Surfacing´s title is very fitting!

Ivana

Great composition. I like the 's' curve of the railway line. Great colour tones.

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  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-11 12:14]

Very pleasant light effect and cropping I like it a lot.
Edie

wow this is space way .........

Hi Tomasz.

Wonderful!
Great tracks against the shine of the sun.
They give a real good feeling of perspective.

have a nice day, Aleks

Hi Tomasz,
Wonderful photo, light, colours, POV... excellent.
Regards,
Victor

Hi Tomasz,
Intriguing lines...!
I love the atmosphere and the strange colours, amazing!
Hope you don't mind if I take you passed the 100s...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2499 W: 56 N: 3862] (17478)
  • [2006-07-04 16:50]
  • [+]

Halo Tomasz,
Bardzo wspaniale zdjecie tych torow ktore jak dwie linie
prowadza do wspomnien.Bardzo ladna kompozycja i swiatlo.Wspomnienia w tym zdjeciu prowadza mnie na gorny slask gdzie na takich torach zbieralo sie wegiel.Bardzo podoba mi sie to zdjecie .
Janusz

FAJNE,CIEKAWIE WYKONANE,PODOBA SIE BARDZO!POZDRAWIAM;)))

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  • aros Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 19 N: 23] (141)
  • [2006-07-08 4:39]
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Excellent diagonal composition. The light reflecting off the tracks as they disappear into the fog makes this perfect. I've added it to my favourites.

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 599 W: 66 N: 31] (5812)
  • [2006-07-10 15:49]
  • [+]

Beautiful shot.
I like that mist and light.
Excellent work.

Hi Tomasz,
Is it a silly thing to write in a photo with that account of points? Just joking...
Railway lines always has been one of my favourite topics, I don't know why.
Light is great as well of the composition. The leaves that appear in the right side look nice.
Regards,
Valeria.

Hi Tomasz,

It's been a whie since I visited your site. I like your work. This one is just perfect. Very good!

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  • dando Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 1] (139)
  • [2006-07-26 4:38]
  • [+]

Hi Tomasz, nice shot with good curves and perspective. I love the glint of light reflecting off the tracks. Also the way the track leads you through the shot and into the mist in the background. Another great shot, your photography is a pleasure to view. TFS.
Dean.

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  • Elfik Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 9 N: 39] (2428)
  • [2006-07-30 19:24]
  • [+]

cudowne ¶wiatło..
mocno mnie poruszyło to zdjęcie..pewnie prze zjakie¶ wewnętrzne osobiste odniesienia do tematu..

dzięki
N.

very peacefull photo!
The train track bring our eyes accross the picture, the light is amazing..
tfs

Fred

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  • seb Gold Star Critiquer [C: 80 W: 6 N: 3] (393)
  • [2006-07-31 18:25]
  • [+]

Hello Tomasz ,
Very nice composition ,
great capture ! Congratulations !

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  • nebs (58)
  • [2006-11-29 21:26]
  • [+]

Hi Tomasz:

Love your pics, they have that simplistic beauty quality. This one lets your mind wander and has that moody quality...
Keep it up

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