"There is always hope"

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• teutza (794)
• [2006-05-24 17:58]

hy!that's a nice expresion on her face!and the b\w looks fine!welcome back!:)

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• Tintin (1974)
• [2006-05-24 20:29]

Very good too see you again, Robert, as I have missed your beautiful portraits. This is a very nice one and I like the pose and the expression on her face. I am not completly certain about the background where we see the side of the other sofa as I think it would have been better without it. I do like the natural light on her face and you have not lost your touch with B&W pictures. Well done!

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• Beger (15131)
• [2006-05-24 20:58]
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I discover your gallery with happiness. You have a style! I like much this B&W with the ray of light illuminating this beautiful face. The installation of the young woman is excellent with her leg parallel to the angle of its head. What beautiful glance turned towards the light. Bravo Robert! Annie

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• TonyFoto (3630)
• [2006-05-25 1:30]
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Hi Robert,
Both the lighting, pose, expression and composition are excellent! But it should have been sharpper with tripod.
Antony

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• DarkoG (996)
• [2006-05-25 2:23]
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Hi Robert

Welcome back. This is good portrait. You caught dreamy expression of pretty young woman.
But IMHO there is two distractive details that draw attention from your model.
First is the watch on her hand. REflection of light on watch get wiever attention.
SEcond is light on couch at right.
Both these detail draw the wievers eye away from girls face. I think since girl look at something above her and on right that this two detail that lead eye in oposite direction is'nt good for this photo. Try to darken them.

REgards Darko