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There is a feeling, striking me suddenly many times while being with my daughter... I'm coming back to my childhood, beautiful childhood, which I can see only in my memories now, like in a not very clear mirror. Like this one - in a park, a piece of metal plate, where children may slide down.
This photo was turned upside down. I touch that plate and I have the impression I touch the border between past and present. I'm looking into the face of my little one and I have the impression I see myself - in that dream - my beautiful childhood - the secret - that will never come back. |
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a very poetic note to complement a poetic photograph. great idea to flip the image. the viewer makes eye contact with the reflection of your daughter and it really draws us in to the frame. Great job!
- ABunce
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(1277) - [2006-05-29 19:57]
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Incredibly poetic, Piotr.
Such a touching image, and lovely ,sad sentiment behind it.
Annetta
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- golgi (34)
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Love the note, love the mood of your shot.
Keep posting.
Regards
Franco
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- erdna
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(5421) - [2006-05-30 9:48]
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Bautiful picture composition properly rotated for effect. Your write-up is very touching I cannot help but think of my childhood and my father's photographs when I was the age of your daughter.
Andre'
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