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the tune


the tune
Photo Information
Copyright: Piotr Wojakowski jr (piwo82) Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 18] (683)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08-12
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS350D/Digital Rebel XT, Canon 50/1,8 II
Exposure: f/1.8, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Rhymea's favourite 2 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-09-26 6:40
Viewed: 952
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 29
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I've added the frame in Photoshop.
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beautifull portret, the facther hair is hanging in the face, gives a very nice aspect, good compo and framing too
A-Fr

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  • cse Gold Star Critiquer [C: 276 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-09-26 6:52]

Hi Piotr,
very nice and lovly..
and the white circles at the background is in good balanced with listening music..

dim tis dim tis dim dim dim tis :)

See u,
Cihan Selcuk Eksi

bardzo dobre zdjecie. szkoda ze modelka nie patrzy sie w obiektyw. wtedy kadr bylby uzasadniony. dalabym wiecej dolu

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 474 W: 94 N: 249] (3371)
  • [2006-09-26 7:04]

Hi Piotr,
Good composition. I think i would have cropped to see just over the wrist because the arm took a lot of space in the bottom of the picture. You catch an impression very well, and i love the luminosity.
Well done !
Ivan

excellent composition. very good portrait!
tfs-jon

Hi Piotr,
Excellent portrait...
Beautiful background and composition.
Regards,
Mani

Nice and interestinf composition...
Well done!!! :)
Good job! I like it!

Nice natural portrait of a yong girl
Like the window refection
Good DOF
RuudBlok

Bardzo ladne zdjecie. Uwielbiam ta glebie ostrosci.

Zasluzone dwa punkty :-)

Pozdrawiam - atomant

i love this!!! very natural and great composition....her expression of non caring adds to the mood....superb!

Wonderful light on this model, Piotr. There's nothing out of balance, OE'd or UE'd. The story to me, 'Wow! I dig this tune, wanna listen?'

I like the light in this photo, I'd like to know more about how you did it. It looks like you used a reflector to light her face?
Composition is good, expression is a little odd, it doesn't look to me like she's listening to - or enjoying - music?
All in all a nice shot though
TFS
Rew

piekny portret:)
pozdrawiam
ola

Great capture, very nice composition and subject. I like the candidness of the shot.

Hi Piotr,

I like your timning, the composition, and of course the subject. You've caught an expression that isn't often seen, with the hair across the face, and the eye looking up. It's very intriguing, and I wonder where she is looking, and what has distracted her from the music. I'm also very fond of the bokeh in the background, which is especially satisfying since I am considering the lens that you took this with.

;-D

André

this shot very very good...excellent framing and mysterious expression

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