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Basia ##


Basia ##
Photo Information
Copyright: Anna Padalis (Ania_Madina) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 293 W: 91 N: 38] (595)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon F60, Nikkor 28-80mm, Ilford Pan 400
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-09 13:11
Viewed: 534
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Basia ##

Not typical portrait I think.

i hope you like it

Studio photo, one studio lamp.

Earth, Europe, Poland, Cracow, Studio
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Very harmonic, soft lines, and attractive use of light. It could have been a bit bigger in size though :)

TFS
Chris

Hi Anna
There is a lot I like about this portrait. I think the light is very nice and flatters your model's skin and features. Good background.
The crop is a little too close, I think it needs more space above and to the right, I find it claustrophobic.
Also - do make sure your photo is 800 pixels along the largest edge, in TL "size matters."
regards
Rew

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1866 W: 127 N: 3024] (16581)
  • [2006-10-09 16:46]

Hi Anna, I like this portrait very much, the lighting, her expressiion, beautiful soft lines. I also agree with Rew about the tight crop.

Cheers,
Sweety
p.s thought I like to do a workshop for you, but you have it turn off...

  • Good 
  • riems Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 125 W: 15 N: 48] (1675)
  • [2006-10-10 17:58]
  • [+]

I love the BW tones and details, Anna, but the pose is not very feminine though to my modest opinion. It might have been more feminine if she had her right hand laid upon her left arm, with the fingers stretched in the direction of her elbows, just a little bit bend and spread over.

I love it...the lighting is great.
you make these lights look like window lighting..
Great work.
Matt

  • Great 
  • Mite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 122 W: 0 N: 62] (506)
  • [2006-10-31 21:13]

Hi Anna
Not typical but quite nice. The light falls with a good angle on the skin and the direction of her gaze is a +.
Well done

its realy nice. i like B&W on this photo and u use the light realy good. TFS

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