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Emila


Emila
Photo Information
Copyright: Lukasz Talaga (HIMself) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 375 W: 6 N: 9] (3574)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-30
Categories: Nature, Artwork, Event, Decisive Moment, Portrait
Camera: Sigma sd10 ( foveon x3 ), SIGMA 18-50 f:3.5-5.6 DC
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-07 11:12
Viewed: 862
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Witam, jedno ze zdjęć z pleneru ślubnego :)
myślę, że pokaże czasem coś jesczze, dawno mnie tu nie było ;)
p.s tło naturalne, a modelka nie wycinana, ( na innym forum mi tak ludzie pisali )

Pozdrawiam
Regards for all


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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 4 N: 58] (551)
  • [2007-07-07 11:20]
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Professional quality as usual, nothing to criticize on the technical side, the image is crisp and the colors are great. Artistically, the left side of the image is rather empty and I wonder if a square format wouldn't have looked much better. Did you remove the background in Photoshop?

A beautiful delicate shot!
The centered compo works really well here.
Lovely light, timing and work on exposure.
A pleasure to look at!

thank you, Karina:)

Nice details, but I would've cropped it to where she wasn't in the center.
TFS
Leanne

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2007-07-07 12:49]

Hi Lukasz,

Beautiful photo...beautiful girl...beautiful moment.
All perfect in this work.5*****
Fernando

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  • rio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 134 W: 4 N: 64] (940)
  • [2007-07-07 13:11]

hi lukasz,
this picture is great! the subject is very clear and the background is wonderful! nice exposure on this picture! well done!

rio

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8651)
  • [2007-07-07 13:33]

Nice portrait.I am impressed by the beautiful black bg contrasting very well with the white dress.Being a fan of the rule of the thirds I would have placed the character to fall on the third vertical of the image and I would have left a little bit more space above the head .But the light and colors are well worthed the smileys.Tfs.
Michel

Beautiful tones, sharpness, metering and colour. Beautiful model also.

I'm unsure about the crop though - with the top of her hair missing, the veil disappearing off to the right and unnecessary negative space on the left, I think this could have been better composed.

Nice work overall though
Rew

Beautifull bride in a nice natural pose. I like the field behind her and the way the wind on it.

Hi Lukasz, I thought the shot was nice, perhaps not cutting the very top of her head off and moving her to the right or left would have been just grande. TFS.

Hi Lukasz,
Very nice and beautiful shot! The black background might be a good experiement.
Antony

High class portrait. Light and mood are superb.

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