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portrait 23
Photo Information
Copyright: Magdalena Naklicka (MagdalenaN) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 461 W: 106 N: 262] (5718)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-02-03
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.2, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-03 3:50
Viewed: 363
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
as usual me in b/w with grain...
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Hi Mag,

As usual.... but with a presentable smile poping out !!!!
Great looks, and eyes strike deep.
All the best.
Good effects too..

jean paul

cześć Magda:) powrót do portretów? Bardzo fajnie że pozostajesz przy swojej ulubionej technice, bo jest najbardziej odpowiednia do portretów; piękna twarzyczka w - BW.
Pozdrowionka Karola

Czolem!
Prosze, prosze, czysta jak lza twarz Panny Magdy N.! Piekny portret. Rewelacyjne swiatlo, rewelacyjny kontrast. Brawo Magda!
Pozdrowiska!

this one is nice good contrast

Pasuje Ci czarno biale Magda..
Czarne oczy golf i wlosy w dodatku masz jasna karnacje
Super kontrast i pomysl!
Dzieki za foto :]

Pozdrawiam!
Ania

Hi, Magdalena!

Excellent BW work! Nice composition with charming model and nice tones.

Ildiko

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1601 W: 128 N: 2771] (10658)
  • [2008-02-05 9:13]

Hi Magdelena

Can you relax a bit? Looking very tense. And how long is your timer? Try to use f/3 and faster shutter to have better sharpness.

Great portrait and good B&W.

TFS, bill

Czesc Magda,
Swietny autoportret! Pieknie wydobylas tutaj kontrast, a mocny punkt calej kompozycji to wyraz twoich oczu. Poza tym swietnie wykonany - super tekstura.
Gratuluje i pozdrawiam,
Iza

Hello Magdalena,

Excellent B&W selfportrait! Excellent focus, light, contrast and perspective!
Congratulations! TFS

Sergio
on wednesday

(*) I did a WS and hope you like it!

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  • jorbe Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 0 N: 1] (233)
  • [2008-02-20 9:35]

Hi Magdalena,

Good portrait. Expression is toughing and the eyes!
Good B&W, excellent contrast.

Good Work!
Jorbe

Hi Magdalena
I just love this self portrait, the look, the centred composition and the
very slightly over exposition on the face. The simple grainy looking
background is excellent, (maybe I would have removed the cushion,
but that is only a minor detail in my mind to make the bg even more
simple). The black and white and the contrasts are great.
Well done.

Paul

SMILE PLEASE!!!

Dear Magdalena Naklicka!
Amazing girl. Wonderful face.
Beautiful lightness.
Original take.
Congratulations.
TFS!

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