Sailing across the Bay of Puck

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• Redrubin (0)
• [2008-03-27 5:32]

Hi Andrzej
welcome on TL with this beautiful sea shot
ciao
Lucio

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• Black_Dog (1815)
• [2008-03-27 5:32]
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Czesc Andrzej!
Swietny POV, bardzo dobra kompozycja. Znakomote swiatlo i kolory. Ale widze niedorobke: to cos z prawej strony kadru nalezalo wyciac. A tak zostal brud. Ogolne wrazenie jednak dobre.
Witak w rodzinie TL. Nie daj sie!

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• spacebar (1079)
• [2008-03-27 5:39]

Hello Andrzej
and welcome on TL.
As your first post, I am very well impressed.
It seems to me a contemporary crusade!
Well done!
Ciao, Antonella

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• machinelove (16007)
• [2008-03-27 5:40]

I like htis shot a lot Andrzej,
the water motion is great, the slight
tilt of the horizon works for this subject matter.
Great blue sky.
- Vincent

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• Freddie (6323)
• [2008-03-27 5:40]

Hi Andrzej! Welcome to TL! :)
It's much better POV on the right side of these vessels rather than on the left because of the lighting but I'm sure you can't choose the right POV unless you're the captain :) You should have cropped or cloned out the brown thing on the right to make this pic better. I like the exposure and the pixel quality is high. Keep posting more photos!
Cheers!
Freddie :)

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• wbriques (2504)
• [2008-03-27 5:41]
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Andrzej,
Very goos DOF and light. Did an workshop with little cropping to enhance the photo features.
Hope you like it.
Cheers,
Wellington

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• Masroor (342)
• [2008-03-27 5:51]

Hi Andrzej,

Welcome to TL. That's a great shot! Very nice blue colors are there. I am sure you have forgot to crop the most right part of the image.

Regards,
Masroor

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• germma (38)
• [2008-03-27 6:12]

Beautifull scene..maybe to darknes, but wery nice action ambient!
Well done!

Igor

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• silvio (0)
• [2008-03-27 15:23]

Hi Andrzej
very nice capture, but l think you had to cropp a bit the right part of photo.

regards, S

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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2008-03-28 0:29]
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Hello Andrzej,
Powerful first post, with a lot of dynamism in it.
Some flaws though:
- horizon is not level
- photo should be cropped on the right side, in order to get rid of the detracting "thing" on the foreground.
It is true colours are a bit dark, but I think this strong contrasts are quite impressive and enhance the above mentionened dynamism of your photo.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• EOSF1 (20077)
• [2008-03-31 15:40]

Well composed shot, good POV and good technique, well done, thanks!

Mario