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My First Auto-Portrait


My First Auto-Portrait
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Copyright: Paulina Sala (Pelin) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 5 N: 31] (483)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-12-17
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-18 6:10
Viewed: 249
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
So this is my first auto portrait
turned black & white plus contrast.
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To rminkow: :-)Pelin 1 12-21 02:37
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nice one
black and white is looking good

Regards
Deepak

hi pelin


this is nice shot
it will become more good if you crop a bit in the right side.

but job well done

tfs

bhot

Excellent work Paulina!
You have captured a very attractive self portrait.
Great look and expression, super b/w conversion.
Well done.
- Vincent

Hi Paulina,
Well prepared self portrait shot, perfectly exposed in black and white. Nice tones, good pose to capture. Sharpness and details are also impressive, well done! TFS.
Best wishes,
Kristof

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  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 37 N: 206] (2812)
  • [2008-12-18 10:16]

Hi Paulina, interesting shot and good the choice of B & W. Compliments, Adele

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  • Peeotr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 148 N: 322] (2301)
  • [2008-12-18 16:16]

Ekspresyjna z Ciebie dziewczyna :-) Dynamiczna kompozycja, fajny moment zatrzymany w twarzy. Przydało by się jakieś inne światło, to za bardzo podkreśliło policzki na dolnej ich krawędzi, jest też ostry cień po nosem :-)

Hi Paulina...nice self portrait...the light and details are fine....when you do the conversion to black and white try playing with the channel mixer...depending on your skin color you can create some nice effects by highlighting usually the red channel and decreasing the blue channel....

Good luck.

Roger

cze Paulina !

swietnie wyszlo!!
niektorzy by zapytali czemu czolo ucielas, ale i tak ladna jestes:))
Super bluzka?! tez taka chce!:D
ANIA

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  • rebel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 228 W: 65 N: 14] (1177)
  • [2008-12-23 4:51]

Hey Paulina
nie ma jak samemusobi estrzelić taki portrecik.
Pozdrawiam i powodzena prz kolejnych probach
Marcin

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