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Copyright: Elzbieta Bielaszewska (elkab) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 72 W: 51 N: 41] (739)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-05
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon 300D
Exposure: f/4, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-07 3:59
Viewed: 713
Points: 10
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  • jajko Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 13 N: 11] (168)
  • [2005-07-07 4:12]
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piekne miekkie swiatlo. super POV i kadr. jak dla mnie zdjecie tajemnnicze i lekko bakowe. ma cos w sobie. podoba sie. i z pewnoscia moge stwierdzic ze to dobra praca jak nie najlepsza z ostatnio widzianych tutaj.

pozdrawiam. lukasz

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2005-07-07 6:49]

good image.
Elzbieta.
i like pov
vik

I like it! Cool use of flash or whatever you used to light your face. Funny idea, lying on the ground. The only imporement I could suggest is trying to get a more interesting background. I like the sky but there seems to be a tower of something in the background. Maybe if you had composed it so that we could see it more, it might add an interesting touch. Anyway, nice idea. JP

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  • booz Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 1] (643)
  • [2005-07-07 12:19]

ale bajer - słoneczko złapałaś rewelacyjnie - dodało niesamowitych kolorków do całości :)
Pozdrawiam
Tomek

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  • dznguy (38)
  • [2005-07-31 21:55]
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Excellent POV. I would like to see more sky perhaps so that the horizon line lies at the bottom 2/3 of the picture (remember the rule of thirds). I would also just touch out that object that's protruding above his nose.

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