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Copyright: Piotr Kubic (Peeotr) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 387 W: 147 N: 321] (2305)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-05
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Canon 70-200 f4L
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): evvka's favorite from TL#1 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-07-14 18:49
Viewed: 891
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just a portrait.

By the way - a story

My friend said to me: if you want to make a portrait of somebody, you ask her/him to sit down and in a moment you realize - it's not good... Some people look interesting when you meet them on a street, when you talk to them. But in front of a lens - they lose any expression, become not interesting at all. Then you think - what to do? Cannot say just "thank you" without making any shot. So - just ask her/him to do anything - to show a tongue or to do something strange. Surely you will have an "artistic" photo :-)

When I look at this girl I know her face expression was spontaneous, so it's not artistic, but real ;-)
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  • orbiter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 630 W: 106 N: 588] (3125)
  • [2005-07-14 19:08]
  • [2]

Wow! what a capture. Thats a great expression, I wonder what she's thinking. It looks like "that look." The one you get when they've not got their own way. Great shot Piotr. Well done

John

Hi Piotr!
Beautiful portrait!
Composition and sensational framing!
I liked the natural pose and of the crop! congratulations!
Very good!
David.

I like the expression on her face. Full of concentration. Lovely candid portrait.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4436 W: 431 N: 7620] (45660)
  • [2005-07-15 4:40]

Hi Piotr

A superb portrait with excellent sharpness & dof. I like the tight cropping & framing. Well done!

Sincere photo! :) You have good eye for catching the moment.
Photo is nice, although maybe a bit overexposed, but not disturbing. Her eyes are in perfect focus, which is very important. Good job. Perhaps you might show us what's the surface she grabbed with her fingers, but that's up to you. Cropping the top all the way to the forehead will produce different approach to her eyes, you might try that also.
Anyway, this is very good job done!

Regards

It's real, I can tell and cute and fun and a whole lot of other things. I realy like the way you cropped it.

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  • booz Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 1] (643)
  • [2005-07-15 7:14]

śliczne - takie prawdziwe i 100% autentyczne :)
Pozdrawiam
Tomek

young children are great for spontaneous photos
as you've shown here Piotr
her face is very real - she's being herself
and looking cute and slightly mischievous ;-)
at that age they are too young to get nervous
or lose expression in front of the lens
nicely done - i need not say "high key" works well here
you obviously knew that ;-)
but it does reinforce the sparkle in her eyes
regards
"Suh"

Hello Piotr,
Great portrait.. with a great modelling..
Composition is perfect.. color and light are perfect..
Congrats,
..Calayan

a good portrait, very natural, clean and crisp, (*_*)

What a beautiful portrait, amazing shot.

Marleen

ładnie pokazane dziecko ...

  • Great 
  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 750] (5431)
  • [2005-08-03 23:48]

I just got back from Southern California and I decided to take a look at TL photos before going to sleep. I came across this photo and I cannot take my eyes off. The expression you got from her is priceless!

Andre'

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  • amg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 94 W: 4 N: 29] (1594)
  • [2005-08-18 17:24]

Hello Piotr.
Fantastic picture. The girl's expression is only, superb.
Congratulations.

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-08-23 1:59]

Nice to meet you Piotr.
Yes! I agree what you have been describe here,
Without originality photograph is nothing.

Thanks for sharing,

Wong

Hi Piotr
A very interesing portrait. Her eyes are very beautiful. And her expression just provides a good interpretation of your note. Your pp work is excellent.
Antony

very nice portrait. I like the eyes and expresion.

  • Great 
  • olam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 150 W: 12 N: 20] (714)
  • [2006-02-04 6:00]

to zdjecie jest fajne! :) mina i oczeta niesamowite! nie mowiac juz o wykonaniu! Pzdrawiam :)

So real excellent portrait...

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