Annie

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• smoothdude (1330)
• [2005-08-11 19:17]

Lovely portrait here. Nice composition and use of black and white.

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• TonyFoto (3734)
• [2005-08-11 20:42]

Very nice picture. She is beautiful and looks a bit shy. Excellent shot, Irek.
Tony

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• mlopes (196)
• [2005-08-11 20:58]

Hello Irek, very well done, she's beautifull and you did a great work, she seems confident wich is good.

Nice B&W version, wonder about the colour one

Mario

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• law (1764)
• [2005-08-12 0:53]

Hi Irek,
Very nice portrait and i like it in B&W. Good composition and she look so beautiful like this. Welcome to TL Irek.
Regards,
Lawrence

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• ruudblok (22361)
• [2005-08-12 4:38]

Great portrait. It’s quit a risky position to place the face completely left in the field. Let me be clear. Most people read a photo like a book from left to right. If the important part comes direct you stay there for a will and will go on. This uninteresting part is quit big. Noting in your composition brings me back. That’s way I call it risky. But no risk no fun. Real good thank you

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• Dawn (17532)
• [2005-08-12 5:56]

Great Portrait..she looks very lovely...
Welcome to Treklens...

Regards
Dawn.

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• reveur59 (1260)
• [2005-08-12 9:30]

Superb portrait! The composition is beautiful and the expression of that beautiful young girl is just so soft... The definition is remarquable too! A very very very nice portrait!
Patrick

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• ropetko (0)
• [2005-08-12 10:08]

Excellent portrait, too bad I ran out of points for today :((
Hi there Irek, have a warm welcome here on TL. I love to see more portrait photographers joining us here.
Photo is great, B&W is really a good choise, although I prefer the color versions so is there a possibility to see the color version as a WS?
Composition is excellent and her arms makes great frame to the portrait. Her palm under her chin makes me think like she's a professional model, because "ordinary" people would put palm directly on the chin, making face look unnatural.
I like the way those hair (is that actually fabric?) falls on her face, that's good detail. The only thing that I "dislike" here is the fact her left eye is not that sharp as the right!! You could do some sharpening or use deeper DOF... You could also sharpen her lips instead doing something undefined here (half lightened and half blurred).
Anyway, take this "critiques" as my efforts to create a masterpiece from a great shot. This photo deserves more than two points and I think I will come to check your portfolio more often!
Great job done, Irek! Looking forward for your future posts.
Regards

Robert

P.S. Here are the points :)

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-08-13 15:34]

Very nice portrait, Irek, of a beautiful young girl who seems really comfortable in front of the camera. You have captured a really nice expression in her face. Well done!

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-08-15 16:12]

Nice portrait of a lovely girl. Great comp and good choice of B&W
Well done!

take care, Stef

:)) smile for you!

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• bscheller (32)
• [2005-08-15 18:54]

hej irek!
podoba mi sie portret, bardzo fajny. jej mina, gdzie patrzy, i wogole pozycja kamery.

super!
pozdr.
-Bartek

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• nikant (392)
• [2005-08-19 2:32]

beautiful portrait, nice light and good BW! well done!

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• hampshiregirl (983)
• [2005-08-23 12:45]
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• lobo (3)
• [2005-09-27 17:53]

poprostu wypas...podoba mi sie wszystko tu...gratuluje