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Between Waves of Softness


Between Waves of Softness
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Copyright: Luciana Gouveia (LuciG) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-06
Categories: Nature, Experimental, Macro
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): WILD LIFE'S COMMANDING PRESENCE, Personal 100. Thank you all. [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-02-09 12:53
Viewed: 1370
Points: 108
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A Delicate touch which I hope Will brighten up a little of your day!


I tried some version, but i cannot chose which one I enjoy most. Which one do you enjoy most, this one or the WS?

Thank you for your opinion.

doganizler, PierreFrigon, Fisher, GreenBaron, tfebbo, cstathoulis, moli, lgfoto, OeilMagique, lucbus, kurekpit, jan515, Refugee, Silvio2006, SkyF, macgarret1, wkshelton, valari, c_rapp, mjdundee, mugush, Emma has marked this note useful
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To rychousmama: Lara ...LuciG 1 02-13 18:21
To lucbus: MERCI!LuciG 1 02-13 18:19
To puffy: ola!!LuciG 1 02-13 18:17
To kurekpit: hi piotr!LuciG 1 02-13 18:16
To jan515: hallo!LuciG 1 02-13 18:16
To Refugee: :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:15
To marcocig: :) :) :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:14
To Silvio2006: good evening!LuciG 1 02-13 18:13
To mortcdz: :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:12
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To timtim: :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:11
To Photograph2u: Merci.LuciG 1 02-13 18:10
To broadcaster: hi :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:09
To OeilMagique: Bonsoir Paul!LuciG 1 02-13 18:08
To jpdeloof: Merci!LuciG 1 02-13 18:07
To krzesz: :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:06
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To animalcrazy: :) :)LuciG 1 02-13 18:05
To cloverstar: hello!LuciG 1 02-13 17:58
To moli: hi!LuciG 1 02-13 17:57
To kfreud: :)LuciG 1 02-13 17:55
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To dada: Anca!LuciG 1 02-13 17:54
To sleger: :)LuciG 1 02-13 17:53
To Marie-Jose: Bonsoir Marie-José!LuciG 1 02-13 17:52
To perryhooter: MERCI!LuciG 1 02-13 17:51
To izmirli: ~ :) ~LuciG 1 02-13 17:50
To Mrlittle: hi Frans.LuciG 1 02-13 17:48
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To jeffsurepix: Thank youLuciG 1 02-11 19:22
To GreenBaron: Hi Hans.LuciG 1 02-09 13:42
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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-02-09 13:09]
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Very beautiful, I like how the textures and blurs unfold around the flower, and the tonal contrast between the earthy browns and the flower. Also, I prefer the softer tones and not the bright colors shown many times in thse types of images. Excellent work!

rgds,
Cristian
ps: I prefer this one.

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  • Aida Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 47 N: 206] (2258)
  • [2007-02-09 13:09]
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Olá Luciana,
Bonita foto. Gosto mais desta versão do que a do ws, acho que tem um reflexo e um brilho aureo muito mais bonito. A delicadeza da flor é surpreendente, muito bonita.
Bj,
Aida

Hola Luciana, me encanta tu foto el enfoque de la flor y los colores del fondo excelentes, muy buen trabajo. Felicitaciones

rintile

Very nice image. Great composition and lovely backlighting on the flower.

TFS

Karan

Bonjour Luci,

I like this one, it's warm an inviting. Beautiful work and well done on the comp.

Mike

Hi Luci,
Excellent DOF with stunning contrast of the flower against...yes against what? The golden glow you add in PP is perfect. Superb posting my dear Luci! TFS.
Hans

Hi Luciana,
indeed delicate touch! Thanks for brighten up my day :) I like better this version than WS. Seems more "warm". Well done! TFS

All the best,
Ioana

Hi Luciana,

I think this one is the best version. Color is more unusual and interesting. I like golden color and blur is weldone in this context.
It's a good work. Congratulations
Pascal

PS : trop tard... en plus, tu parles français... et moi très mal l'anglais... pfff
:)))

Luciana,
I think this is a brilliant image of this delicate flower on what appears to be leather. Given that it appears to be leather to me, I certainly prefer this one to the WS version. Excellent image. Well done. Cheers, Todd

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  • maga Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 12] (528)
  • [2007-02-09 16:46]
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hard to find out for me what it exactly shows (except the flower) but it's very eye-catching.
thanks.
- Magda

Hello Luciana.

I am no supporter of flowers on a photograph but these are complete special. both at colour and at composition .Great
Frans

merhaba dear luciana
wonderful macro picture.wonderful light and colours.good flower.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Bonsoir Luci!

Personnellement , je préfère aussi les tons plus froids et doux du WS (^_^) Le mariage des tons est plus harmonieux.
Amitiés,
Robert

Bonsoir Luci, contente de te voir de retour! Très belle composition. Je préfère cette version, je trouve qu'elle a plus d'impact et est définitivement plus douce.

Belle image, belle composition!

Au plaisir, Marie-José

Hello Luciana

This is a nice macro. I like how the flower is positioned, and the texture of the background is great.

Regards, Sylvain

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2007-02-10 3:35]
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Hi my dear!

oh whate a beauty! golden one:)

tfs
anca

Hi Luci,

I hope you're fine. Oh, I really missed your beautiful photos! :)
This is indeed so delicate! And yes, it made my day. That golden lighting compliments it a lot!

Very well done
Constantinos
ps. I like both photos, but this is brighter and more optimistic.

excellent Macro-ahot with wonderful colours
Karl

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1460 W: 275 N: 2066] (12616)
  • [2007-02-10 5:52]
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hi Luciana. Great composition and point of view. Looks fantastic to me. Well done and Best Regards
J-23

will be back with ;)

Just beautiful. I like the golden colour of the background and also the texture.

The first one is smiling and warm like... Portugal (an early afternoon by the end of spring season); the other one is much colder - Poland? Finland? I'd compare it with a winter sunset... both equally impressive;
my choice: the original! (don't know why :)
cheers - Tomasz

Celle-ci est très jolie mais, à mon avis, dans le WS, le bleu de la fleur ressort plus.
Superbe prise de vue quand même.
Merci
Pierre
:) demain

Hey, Luci!

What a creative shot! I preffer this one to the other in your WS, but that's just me. I find that the flower stands out brilliantly against the gold shimmer in the background, and the detail is more distinct. :-D

TFS,
Hannah

Lovely colour contrast Luci and the controlled depth of field makes the varied textures more pronouced still.
A great picture!
Congratulations!
Bill

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  • luisa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 0 N: 73] (1382)
  • [2007-02-10 19:06]
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Não me consigo decidir entre esta foto e a que está no workshop, são ambas lindissimas!!...
...esta tem mais brilho, tem um ar mais delicado e ao mesmo tempo angelical! voto nesta!!:):)

**

Hello Luciana!!!!Very nice colours combination!!!!Great composition and perspective!!!
Thanks for your commentary!!!
Regards!!!

Hello Luciana,

I always admire the quality of your photos, you give your emotions your heart to produce such pleasing images which always resonates in our minds. Even in the shortest time I admire evrything you have shared which inspires me. Many thanks for knowing you.

Cheers and goodbye,
Jeff

Be Back for your smileys.

hello luciana
I prefer this version with the gilded colors, the blue of the flower is richer in tonality and becomes the principal part of the photograph.
jp

Bonjour Luciana
Présentation tout en douceur, douceur des ondulations, douceur des couleurs de la fleur. Image qui plaît tout simplement. Je préfère la présentation principale qu'à celle de l'atelier, couleurs à mon oeil plus chaudes.

Paul

Hello Luciana.
What a wonderful macro shot, very nice depth of field.
Good work, thanks for sharing and best wishes.

Yasin.

Hi Lucy, I am so pleased to see you are back! I am very well thank you, Hope you are too :)
I missed you and your beautiful work :)

This one is so nice and tender, I love the soft tones, the monochromatic tone of what seems like leather and the violet.

Great close-up and control of light.

I prefer this one. Because I fall for warm colours :)

Very well done! Take care, Yan!

Ps: many thx for your crit and visit in "Golden Retriever Playing in the Snow (2)" :)

I like this one, nice warm tones

Salut Luciana,
J'aime bien cette photo avec la chaleur et la douceur qu'elle propage. J'aime justement plus celle-ci à cause de la chaleurs des tons dorées. J'aime aussi la profondeur de champs que tu as choisi qui adouci l'image.
Salutations.
Luc

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1791 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2007-02-12 5:08]
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Hi Luciana,

What a beautiful shot, love those sharp details, great DOF and colours.. excellent work... :) Superb! Thanks for sharing

Cheers,
Sweety

p.s I like both version, they have their own beauty and mood. :D

Hello Luciana.
Very nice shot,good composition and saturation,well done
Best Regards
TFS

* Piotr *

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2488 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2007-02-12 12:08]
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Hola Luci,
Die Farben schauen sagenhaft. Schön zusammengesetzt mit warmer Beleuchtung und scharfen Details.Die Schärfe und die Details von der Blume sind fantastisch. Gefällt mir sehr.
Gratuliere zu dem herrlichen Bild
Liebe Grüsse.
Janusz

Delightful Luci. Sombre colours, good definition and well composed. TFS,
David

Wonderful play on various textures and lighting here Luci! The warm glow on the dark vinyl (?) really makes it pop out, and contrasts nicely with the delicate purple flower. Even if you didn't add that title I still would have immediately understood the notion of "waves" "softness" and "delicacy." The depth of field in this is incredible. I personally love the original as the workshop, while still beautiful, loses some of that warmth and color that makes this one distinctive and inviting. Really great shot, TFS!
-Lara

Hi Luciana,

I really love this shot! I find amazing the golden textures, the colours tones are splendid too. Grat compo.

Bravo

Marco

Hi Luciana, wonderful dreaming composition with a lovely flower, amazing light and splendid colors, very well done, ciao Silvio
:) tomorrow

Beautiful shot, great use of light and DOF in a simple but really effective composition.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2007-02-13 17:42]
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Hello Luciana,
both compositions are wonderful, but i do prfer this one. I like the golden light on this it works well with the DOF and adds a dream like mood.
TFS..Sky

I like this one Luciana.

Thanks for sharing. Definitely brighten up my day.

TFS.

Bonsoir Luciana,
mon avis sur ta photo ? c'est superbe, ton travail pour obtenir ce résultat est gagnant. Délicat et des tons chauds et vibrants. Mes félicitations.
Cordialement, TFS
Corinne

Hello Luciana,
well done excllent colors Bg POV DOf perfect details very crisp I really like this POV Alot well done and TFS Kyle

Beautiful textures and control of light.
Lovely picture Luciana.
Best wishes Mark

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  • valari Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 964 W: 102 N: 395] (4105)
  • [2007-02-15 22:33]

Hi Luciana,
I think this is a brilliant image of this delicate flower .Perfect and simply...
valentina:)

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 958 W: 20 N: 1285] (7294)
  • [2007-02-16 20:41]

Very nicely captured the textures and details are great. I like the ws too but think you made the right choice for posting. Beautiful. TFS
Christan

Ola Luciana,
THis version is not bad but I personally prefer the original which looks softer - more like an illusion.
Good work and inspiration - TFS Thomas

Estetica imagen, detaca por la coposicion en general, el color, la sencillez y la tranquilidad que transmite. Buen punto de mira, me gusta el contraste de texturas,

Clara

Do i need to say anything about this art work?? I guess no! as many experts wrote fantistic word on it..
simply
PERFECT........
thanks for sharing
love
mugush

Nice play of light and shadows :-)
I like the actual image and the version n2. There is a difference between them. One is soothing and warm the other one effects so chilly....
TFS
Jityna

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1920] (10153)
  • [2007-05-07 17:44]

Hallo Luci,
man möchte die Hand ausstrecken und die Blume nehmen, ein herrliches Bild.Eine herrliche Aufnahme von natur mit guten Farben und Kontrast. Gutes licht und Detail.
Schöne Grüße.
Eva

Hi Luciana!
Don't talk about impressive photos - this one rocks! Superb details and such poetry!
Jure

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