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~ Roofs and Windows Version 2~


~ Roofs and Windows Version 2~
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Copyright: Luciana Gouveia (LuciG) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-03
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/4.5, 3 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TEXAS EXCELLENCE AWARD [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-05-07 17:51
Viewed: 1019
Points: 84
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Je ne sais pas si vous vous souvenez de la première version de ~Roofs and Windows~, c'est une photo riche en manipulation afin de rendre toute la valeur aux couleurs originales. Celle-ci est bien différente. Le Point de vue choisi est le même, mais les couleurs sont autres! J'ai trouvé le petit détail de la fenêtre délicieux et je suis contente de pouvoir le partager ici.

Laquelle des deux versions préférez-vous? Pourquoi? Je suis curieuse de vos réponses! A bientot, et une bonne semaine à tous.

Luci

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Hello Luciana!
Very beautiful colours and light in your composition!
Nice perspective!
Excellent done!
Lili

bella composicion, la luz de la ventana crea una atmosfera perfecta! Saludos. Nil.

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1920] (10151)
  • [2007-05-07 17:56]

Hello Luci,
Die Architektur ist wundervoll, sehr gute Details und klare Farben.Sehr schöne Atmosphäre im Bild. Eine wunderbare Abbildung.
Danke und schöne Grüße.
Eva

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  • carmia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 274 W: 6 N: 126] (3272)
  • [2007-05-07 17:58]

excellent shot! the composition and the colors are beautiful. Very good work! Carme.

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 106 N: 562] (9590)
  • [2007-05-07 18:03]

great dark colours the light in the window draws towards middle nice comp

Hi Luciana
This has a lovely feel about it. I imagine that behind the warm glow of the window is a very cosy dwelling with a real fire. It looks almost fairy tale.
TFS
Philippa

There is a somber, almost eery feel to this! The focal point is the one lit window, a beacon of hope! The roof angles and the perspective of the pov are very dramatic!
Cheers
Otto

Superbe Luci.
fantastique POV pour cette photo.
et les couleurs sobres jouent bien avec la
lumiere par la fenetre au milieu de la photo.
excellent.
a bientot.
Ritz

Hi Luciana, GREAT photo, nice POV, really amanzing photo. TFS

rintile

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2007-05-07 19:44]

Bonsoir Luciana,
J'ai été voir ton autre photo et les deux sont belles mais mon coeur penche plus pour celle-ci. Ce sont les couleurs, ça invite à l'intimité, au partage, à l'échange, je ressens tout ça en regardant la photo que je trouves d'une belle composition avec des couleurs superbes.
Bonne semaine à toi aussi
Salutations
Diane

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  • luisa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 0 N: 73] (1382)
  • [2007-05-07 20:36]

Esta foto tem alma! Muito bonita, excelente cores e uma composição perfeita!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2007-05-07 21:07]

Bonsoir Luci,
Je ne te savais pas que tu étais encore active sur le site! Belle surprise! Cette photo est, à mon avis, meilleure que la première version. L'ambiance de nuit que tu as créée avec la fenêtre éclairée et les chaudes teintes grenat soulignéees délicatement de bleu est tout simplement envoûtante. Bravo! Ravie que tu sois de retour! Annie

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-05-08 1:02]

Love the POV and color textures. The orange light of the window in the middle stands out. Excellent work!
rgds,
Cristian

Hi Luciana,
great composition!
Karl

Je préfère de beaucoup celle-ci. J'aime l'effet qu'apporte la fenêtre éclairée.
Excellent
Pierre

personnelement, je prefere celle ci sans aucun doute.

si la premiere etait effectivement riche en couleur, celle ci, plus sombre lui donne un charme, une athmosphere que l'autre l'a pas.

en tout cas bravo pour l'ensemble de ton oeuvre :)

Bonne journée

Olivier

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  • lukie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-05-08 12:18]

Hello Luciana,

this has something like in the old (Christmas)postcards. Very lovely with the lights in the window.

regards,

Luc.

Hi Luciana.
Very strong and a great composition.
Special colors
Results a beauty.
Frans

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2007-05-08 13:36]

Looks like a painting ... fairy tale houses ... one-eyed darkness ...

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2732 W: 412 N: 2987] (32821)
  • [2007-05-08 14:02]

selam Luciana ;
super captured and super detail and colors..selamlar

Hi Luci,

So nice to see you again! :)
Such a beautiful photo!! Great lighting here!! It really looks like a painting!

Very well done
Constantinos

Hi Luciana: This is an absolutely stunning Photo !!the lines leading my eye to the bright light in the window, the colours and lighting creat a great mood of mystery; what is happening there we can only imagine.... all your work is wonderful..... thanks Luciana........ Roman

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
  • [2007-05-09 6:28]

intresting shot Luci
great pov and well composed
David

Hello Luciana,

You have a beautiful name (brazilan, portuguese name, perhaps?)

I was gotten passionate for all your photographs, all gorgeous ones!

Now you're one of my favorites.

TFS.
Sergio

:) tomorrow

Hi Luciana, splendid POV, wonderful light and colors, great nocturn composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

Beautiful compo, special colors and textures. The original version of Roofs and Windows is very good, the colors are remarkable, but I prefer this one, because for me a night shot is more mysterious and this lonely lighted window has something strange and inviting, it makes you wonder what is behind it...
TFS,
Andreea

Hi Luci. Lovely colour and light, very mystical. Good POV and simply but well presented. TFS,
David

Hi Luci,
Well...within seconds of being in your gallery I can see you are very talented and have an awesome gallery of photos! This is excellant...your POV on this is stunning...it's like you was suspended in mid-air to get this shot. Top quality work here!

Lyndon

Olá Luciana,
Como dizes, fabuloso POV!! Uma forma muito atractiva de apresentação.
Quanto à tua questão sobre qual a preferência...eu prefiro esta devido ao pormenor da janela (e não só) sendo ela o primeiro ponto de atracção para esta maravilhosa foto. O facto de ser uma foto nocturna (ou não, talvez lhe tenhas aplicado o efeito nocturno)tambem a favorece muito.
Obrigada por compartilhar.
Fica bem,
Lurdes
P.amanhã

Bonsoir Luciana.
Je viens de découvrir ta galerie, Elle est vraiment très interessante. Tu as beaucoup de talent.
Pour ta photo, je te dirais que j'aime définitivement celle-ci. Belle composition. Bien vue, Merci de partager. Salutations , Josée

Hi Luciana,
I'm glad you are back again - I missed your special shots a lot.
This one is so impressive, this view down - this window with the light behind, it's such a peaceful atmosphere, I like it very much, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2007-05-15 17:01]

Hallo Luciana,
Sehr schöne Perspektive. Wunderbare und herrliche Komposition. Herrlicher Aufbau auf dem Photo.Dieses ist ein herrliches Bild mit ausgezeichneter Gestaltung wunderschön.
Liebe Grüße.
Janusz


PS:Es vai para mim bem só os dias anteriores I muito Trabalho e Mim teve abertamente o tempo. Esperando-lhe sou também melhor. Obrigado pela sua cara avaliação. Muito amor. Janusz

Great atmosphere Luciana. Very nice excercise with the colour, structure and focus. Excellent shot. Very well done. tfs. stev

Hi Luci,

I actualy understood your note without having to translate it! But I won't reply French... as that would turn out to be very emberassing. I like the rough textures to this image, and the warm glows that are coming through the windows. I also think the low light conditions are neat... great colour tones, everything looks good here. Good POV, and just a nice scene. TFS!

Biance.

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 598 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2007-05-17 14:05]

Hello
This looks very simple but again very interesting.
Great focus and colours.

This pic is AMAZING...LOVE the angle here, the POV! Very spooky, dark, dramatic here! The window adds a tremendous amount, bringing the eye back into the pic! Very nice Luci!
Linda
B-)

Hi Luciana,great composition! Nice photo!
Well done!
Regards,Chris!

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2007-05-21 19:09]

Bonjour Luciana! Je préfère la première photo à celle-ci à cause de la richesse des couleurs et la netteté des détails.Par contre celle-ci a son petit côté charmeur avec le reflet de la fenêtre sur le toit...L'image est plus granuleuse cependant.Ton travail demeure toutefois des plus intéressants! Merci pour ta visite pour ma photo Abstract with Wings.C'est toujours très apprécié!
Michel

Hi Luciana.
This is like a picture from a dream. POV, colours, composition are great. One of many great pictures in your gallery. Congrats.
Wojciech

I like the roofs leading the viewer's sight to the bright window and the fields behinde!Good POV!
Regards,
chiping

work of art, Lucy. exciting, acute angles make great, unsusal effect. focal point is terrific.
janos

it's got your soul, Luci - very nice composition, warm colors and soft 'painting-like' edges - beautiful! best regards - Tomasz

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  • kitka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 70 N: 223] (2180)
  • [2007-10-30 5:42]

Hello Luciana,
this is master-stroke. Excellent perspective, great position. Photois little bit grainy, but is interesting anyways.
Thanks
Katerina

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