Drinking #2

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-06-17 23:00]
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Hi Tito,
Wow this has such a different look and effect than your first shot of the drinking glass! With the lighting used we are meant to see what's behind, far away, and the colors are more varied. Really good use of a shallow depth of field to focus on the interesting "waves" of colors and tones around the glass in the foreground. The out-of-focus bananas and green fruit (lime?) create bright and interesting colors in the center. Only thing I'd pick on is the way the upper right corner has this turquoise blue that interrupts the rythms of yellow and black in the shot, breaking the continuity of the composition. Try to watch for all the things that are in the background when taking a shot like this (I have a tendency to forget to watch for those things myself when taking photos :P). And although I like those water droplets at the bottom of the glass in-focus, I am thinking they tend to distract more than compliment the shot. Really great shot though and excellent balanced framing and control. Thanks for sharing!
-Lara

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• paulorodrigues (1243)
• [2007-06-19 10:53]

Olá Tito
Gostei da perspectiva
Bom momento
:-)

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• lion (5814)
• [2007-06-21 7:34]

Hi,
I like this, looks very creative and very abstrast.
Good idea for the fruits