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Copyright: Daniela Teixeira (Dmft) (71)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-05-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 400D Digital, Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/4.5
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-17 14:18
Viewed: 249
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
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You are beautiful but this is not a good photo ... it is not properly focused - the focus is on your hair in the background - and your eye is half covered up, making it difficult to create any kind of connection with the viewer.

A Photographer's Note would be good!

Rew

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  • DzULA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 52 W: 19 N: 10] (908)
  • [2009-05-17 17:34]

Such a pretty model, very good B&W portrait

Greetings
DzULA :-*

Bom dia Daniela,

Você é uma bela moça mas o foco errado comprometru sua fotografia.
Fiz um WS para amenizar ligeiramente o problema. Espero que não se importe.
Um grande abraço,
Sergio

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2205 W: 171 N: 0] (28320)
  • [2009-05-20 0:33]

Morning Daniela ;)))
Impressive point of view...beautiful portrait and model...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

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