Interesting composition and I think I can see what you were trying to achieve with the blur that you've applied, although it is a very heavy handed approach to focus the attention on the one person. Of course, this may not be what you were trying to create, but without a photographers note that will always be impossible to know :-(
Also, as an aside, do you think it's entering into the spirit of TL as a community to post 335 pictures but to have only written 35 critiques?
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Interesting composition and I think I can see what you were trying to achieve with the blur that you've applied, although it is a very heavy handed approach to focus the attention on the one person. Of course, this may not be what you were trying to create, but without a photographers note that will always be impossible to know :-(
Also, as an aside, do you think it's entering into the spirit of TL as a community to post 335 pictures but to have only written 35 critiques?