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Bad Day
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Copyright: Jose Rendeiro (jrendeiro) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 337 W: 4 N: 153] (2315)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2003-11-08
Camera: Olympus C-5050Z
Exposure: f/7.0, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-10-12 6:31
Viewed: 453
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
This photo was taken in the Park dos Poetas (Park of Poets) in Oeiras, in one day where my son Peter, already i do not know the reason, decided to make one "birra" (i dont know the word in english), what it is not usual of the part of him. The statue where Peter is leaned is of Fernando Pessoa, one of the biggest portuguese poets of XX century.

I leave this small sample here:

"I Know, I Alone
I know, I alone
How much it hurts, this heart
With no faith nor law
Nor melody nor thought.

Only I, only I
And none of this can I say
Because feeling is like the sky -
Seen, nothing in it to see."

(10.08.1932)
You can read more in: http://pintopc.home.cern.ch/pintopc/www/FPessoa/FPessoa.html
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Evocative shot Jose wonder what he is thinking!
TFS
Chris

Olá José,
Uma birra (também estou bem habituado a elas, hehe) que deu uma boa foto e um bom PP. Boa escolha em deixá-lo a cores.
Abraço, António

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2005-10-12 13:55]

Hi Jose,

What a shot!!!
Excellent capture and well done on the composition and details. The b/w and color are well suited for this scene. Excellent work.

Mike

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  • rui Gold Star Critiquer [C: 279 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-12 16:21]

Olá compadre !
Birras !? Daqui a uns anos ele transforma-as em cervejas !
Excelente trabalho e nota !
Aquele abração,
Rui
P.S. BIRRA em inglês é BEER !!!

Mto boa! Gostei da escolha PB!!

Beautifully done, Jose.

Marleen

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2005-10-13 5:43]

Olá José,

O Parque dos Poetas é um belo sítio para fotograr,passear ou mesmo namorar.A tua foto está muito bem conseguida,o Pedro deu uma ajuda com a birra dele.hehehe
A opção pelo preto e branco foi muito bem pensada e resultou muito bem.
Abraço,
Fernando

Hello Jose, what a nice photo of your son. I love all the elements in your composition and that you turned everything in bw except your son. It makes him stand out.

Very well done and seen.

Cheers, Yan

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