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Prisioner


Prisioner
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Copyright: Aida Ramos (Aida) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 47 N: 206] (2222)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-04
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/13 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-06 4:24
Viewed: 520
Points: 16
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Shine on - Blind Zero

"She stepped into the park
I gave up looking for angels
Each moment loving the last one
The fear is walking us by
I understand all her demons
Relying on the day she will see

Shine On

Your freedom, I cannot bear
I'll try to be immune to the sadness
Now I pretend we are lovers
I keep wondering why

Shine On

You defy, I remain
Prisoner of your decisions
I dream, you laugh
I can remember how it started
One day, you'll see
Details will make all the difference
I love you, goodbye
Now you know I'm gone"
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To Black_Dog: ThanksAida 1 10-07 15:14
To pedromeira: OláAida 1 10-07 03:20
To doganizler: ThanksAida 1 10-07 03:16
To paweljg: ObrigadoAida 1 10-06 14:50
To Lanbowen: HiAida 1 10-06 14:42
To Fortuna: ObrigadoAida 1 10-06 14:40
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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2211 W: 171 N: 0] (28378)
  • [2007-10-06 4:28]
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Hola Aida dear friend ;)))))
great idea...wonderful photo...
Greetings from Macedonia,
J ;)

Hi Aida! I've shot a couple of similar shots recently, I think tunnels like this are great for photography...and you have caught a very nice atmosphere here. My only thought would be to try and catch someone just in the bright area, i think the addition of a figure would add something.

But still, i like this, a very eerie effect.

Nice composition with great lines
Well done
David

Witaj Aida,

Very dark and moody photo... And one hope - light on end's of corridor. Well done & TFS :]

Pozdrowienia z Polski,
(Greetings from Poland)
Pawel

nice perspective.......tfs

fantastico momento e luminosidade. Bom trabalho

Hi Aida! Amazing perspective. Very mysterious place. Original picture. Regards!

Olá Aida,

Interessante trabalho, cores que prendem a atenção e uma bela perspectiva.
Parabéns.
OPC
Abraço,
Sergio

:) amanhã.

Ciao Aida, splendid perspective and wonderful light, very well done, ciao Silvio

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