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Primitive
Photo Information
Copyright: Rita Alves (Barely) (177)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-03
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D70 Digital SLR, Nikkor AF 70-300 mm
Exposure: f/4.2, 1/1600 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Music [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-09-21 15:25
Viewed: 740
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
Vocalista dos Primitive Reason durante a sua actuação na Festa do Avante.
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To Savignole: thanksBarely 1 09-22 05:54
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Great music/concert photo! Perfect frame! Congratulations!

Hi,
Nice POV for this portrait of a singer in exhibition, his position gives a dynamics to the composition. And certainly a pleasant recollection for you…
Now, about the composition, I think a little crop on the lower part may be nice : small views of jeans and tattoo on the abdomen disturbs a little. I propose you a workshop, hope you don’t mind.
TFS,
Martine

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  • redol Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 260 W: 33 N: 12] (2254)
  • [2005-09-22 11:09]

Estupendo momento captado. Gran composición.
Parabens.

To Savignole. By cropping the image the way you did, it looks like the singer is naked which gives a wrong impression of a band in my eyes. And it is cool to see that there is a part of a tattoo, it will lead people to curiosity. I think that this photo gives a good impression of how the dude is. But hey that is my opinion! :S

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