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Alex Paixao II


Alex Paixao II
Photo Information
Copyright: Simon Franco (simonfranco) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 147 W: 58 N: 112] (1587)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Konica-Minolta DiMAGE X31
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-02 3:25
Viewed: 692
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Original was color

converted to B/W
added grain
adjusted levels
cropped and framed


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Great shot. So calm and innocent. great bw. well done Simon.

Bolas, que faço filhos mesmo bonitos. heheh. Gosto muito de fotos a dormir.
Bj

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-08-02 12:38]

Such a sweet expresion of beauty and nature.

Best compliments for sharing a sensual moment of life.

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 122 N: 200] (7348)
  • [2006-08-02 14:41]
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in fact I am not used to write much critiques in this site, because of mostly being busy about with other photo sites...

as you dealed with my last photo I understood you need to be critique...

First of all, I am really disturbed with the grains... really over the acceptional rate...

and framing... it is like a wagoon.. you tried to feed it from bottom and above but not successfull...

first you must know what you will work on it.. and then you have to decide on framing...

where is the composition? you could say if there must be a composition with a photograph...

but my answer can only be "yes"...

here with this photo I only see a little girl sleeping with an unusual framing...

really you have to work about what a composition is... and you have to learn of cropping much...


you could be disturbed with my critique...

please Simon... I would like to share what I know... no offense...

I am sure you have other great photos in your portfolio as well...

now I am going to check...

see you.. :))

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