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Alex Paixao II
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
Original was color
converted to B/W
added grain
adjusted levels
cropped and framed
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Great shot. So calm and innocent. great bw. well done Simon.
Bolas, que faço filhos mesmo bonitos. heheh. Gosto muito de fotos a dormir.
Bj
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(1376) - [2006-08-02 12:38]
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Such a sweet expresion of beauty and nature.
Best compliments for sharing a sensual moment of life.
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(7348) - [2006-08-02 14:41]
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in fact I am not used to write much critiques in this site, because of mostly being busy about with other photo sites...
as you dealed with my last photo I understood you need to be critique...
First of all, I am really disturbed with the grains... really over the acceptional rate...
and framing... it is like a wagoon.. you tried to feed it from bottom and above but not successfull...
first you must know what you will work on it.. and then you have to decide on framing...
where is the composition? you could say if there must be a composition with a photograph...
but my answer can only be "yes"...
here with this photo I only see a little girl sleeping with an unusual framing...
really you have to work about what a composition is... and you have to learn of cropping much...
you could be disturbed with my critique...
please Simon... I would like to share what I know... no offense...
I am sure you have other great photos in your portfolio as well...
now I am going to check...
see you.. :))