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Killing Loneliness


Killing Loneliness
Photo Information
Copyright: Marta Paixao (Don_Vitto) (86)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-08-13 19:54
Viewed: 435
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Memories, sharp as daggers
Pierce into the flesh of today
Suicide of love took away all that matters
And buried the remains in an unmarked grave in your heart

Nailed to the cross, together
As solitude begs us to stay
Disappear in the lie forever
And denounce the power of death over our souls and secret words are said to start a war

With the venomous kiss you gave me
I'm killing loneliness.
With the warmth of your arms you saved me,
I'm killing loneliness with you
I'm killing loneliness that turned my heart into a tomb
I'm killing loneliness.

[Ville Valo - HIM]

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Tão nostálgica... Gosto da suavidade das cores
bj
Nica

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2006-08-14 20:37]

I like the subtle colours in this photo. One suggestion I have is maybe you could crop it slightly at the bottom, so the horizon is slightly lower, to give it a more balanced feel. Nice photo!

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