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Lisboa


Lisboa
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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1541 W: 70 N: 2387] (10421)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-02
Categories: Daily Life, Humorous, Transportation, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-80
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Funiculars of Lisbon (Elevadores de Lisboa) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-08-11 13:56
Viewed: 555
Points: 53
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
a Postcard from lisboa.. and its caracteristic Tram..
the rotation of the image is to increase the sense of height difference that u can breath along the hill of the center..
i hope u like it

comments and critics are welcome..


P.s. sorry for the large text distactive.. i would only like to make something as postcard..
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Hallo marco..
The tilt makes it an interesting phhoto, but in my opinion the large text is quite distractive
verry nice Picture and got job..
regards,
Ella

The large text doesnt bother me, it really feels like a postcard indeed. But more the cut angles distarct me.
But a good picture anyway.
Thanks.
LuDivine

Hi Marco,

I think its great, niether the text nor the angles distract me, I love the colours and grafitti and the angle is good.
TFS
Tom

Ciao Marco :o)
Great shot of this yellow tram ! Very sharp and i like the POV you choose. Excellent light.
I like the way you cut your photo.
Ciao
Marylou

merhaba my friend marco
magnificent interesting lisbon.wonderful colours and composition.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Ciao amigo,
intersting presentation for Lisboa. The tram looks like telling us an old story. Nicely seen and presented to us. Thanks!

Have a lovely day,
Ioana

i like the strange tilt here marco :)
the large text work in this photo, it looks like part of the graffiti on the train :)

koh

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 543 W: 32 N: 47] (6033)
  • [2007-08-12 0:35]

Hi Marco,
yes, this inclined image is effective to enhance not only "the sesnse of height" but also dynamism of the tram indeed. I like this composition.
the colors and scribblings on the tram are real and the present figure,,,it is a little funny but I like nice old tram.
thank you for active image.
Akihisa

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3345 W: 86 N: 2709] (17909)
  • [2007-08-12 1:38]

Rather sloopy down there, Marco.
Very well done.
Jan

hello Marco
the famous tram of Lisbon, the tilt works perfectly, well done
about the large text IMO it's ok in the way you present and frame the photo
regards
jo

Hi Marco,
Well seen this yellow tram in Lisbon. The tilt makes it an interesting phhoto, but in my opinion the large text is quite distractive. Nevertheless I like this posting of the tram I use myself during my visit of Lisbon.
TFS
Hans

:) Later...

Ciao Marco,
Nice capture of a funicular of Lisboa (Graça or Bica ?). Great colours and light. As you say in your note, it would be better without the letters ... :)
Sylvie
ps : it's not a tramway, it's a funicular, a transport to get up and down the hills of the city.

Hello Marco,

This is fine daily life shot.
Sharp and nice colors.
Sorry friend, again that big text is distrating the photo. TFS

Vandana

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2178 W: 59 N: 2397] (13651)
  • [2007-08-12 10:09]

Hi Marco...
Great shot of this 'tram' ! Different and interestinfg...
Very sharp, nice colour and I like it...
Congratulations!
George

Hello Marco,

I really like this composure with great colors Bg POV DOF excllent details very crisp well done and tFS Kyle

PT

Hi Marco, ou return to the vacations? nice photo, great details and colors, good POV. TFS

rintile

Hi Marco,
Lovely shot of this yellow tram and fine postcard. Nice choice of point of view ang good light.
But I agree with Vandana and Ionela - that big text (and dark green color) are distracting the photo.

Best Regards,
Alex
:) tomorrow

Hi Marco,

Interesting presentation . . . Is it empty tram? . . It should be part of tourist guide of Lisboa . . Well done . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

:-)) in 2 hours

Very attractive shot. Very good point of view. I like it.
Best wishes
Achim

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2154 W: 379 N: 2143] (23036)
  • [2007-08-13 6:52]

merhaba Marco...
Great shot of this 'tram' ! Different and interestinfg...
Very sharp, nice colour and I like it...
selamlar

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1683 W: 0 N: 1] (10965)
  • [2007-08-13 11:24]

Hi Marco
Indeed this is a nice postcard.
This is the real Lisboa..
Good comp.
Gr Jos

ciao marco,
questa foto della funicolare mi piace molto.. ne ho una praticamente identica e
rappresenta in pieno lisbona..
la dimensione del titolo non mi dispiace, anzi
rende davvero l'idea della cartolina..
complimenti e..
bentornato!

baci chiara

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3252 W: 375 N: 2704] (11620)
  • [2007-08-13 14:00]

The tram suffered from a heavy graffiti attack... a pity, a clean tram would really have made this a postcard, Marco. The text is big indeed, but given your intention I find it's not disturbing at all.
TFS

Interesting postcard and place - good idea:)
TFS
Regards
mz

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2007-08-14 12:43]

Ciao Marco,

This is a brilliant daylight presentation having a legent of Lisbon. Nicely taken closer shot in diagonal. Excellent image has been taken my friend. Well done.

Many thanks for sharing this image.

Hi Marco !
I like this large text.
Well here in Poland trains and walls looks quite smiliar ;)
Great curve and very narrow street!
Congrats for an idea and concept!
TFS
Ania

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 79 N: 631] (4165)
  • [2008-03-06 2:25]

Hi Marco!
It seems a very steep place. And the street is so narrow. Interesting and somehow humorous, indeed.
Anton

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