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Collapse the light into earth..


Collapse the light into earth..
Photo Information
Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1473 W: 70 N: 2295] (10001)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Event, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS-DX
Exposure: f/11, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-08-21 13:49
Viewed: 889
Points: 92
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I won't shiver in the cold
I won't let the shadows take their toll
I won't cover my head in the dark
And I won't forget you when we part
Collapse the light into earth..
I won't heal given time
I won't try to change your mind
I won't feel better in the cold light of day
But I wouldn't stop you if you wanted to stay
Collapse the light into earth..


“Collapse the light into the earth”
(Porcupine Tree)


People at sunset, as the angels of Wim Wenders..
San Vincente (Portugal)


Comments and critics are welcome..
ciao



N.B.:
Crop + adjust contrast & colors + framing..


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  • Great 
  • stery Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 330 W: 24 N: 71] (2036)
  • [2007-08-21 13:52]

Hy Marco!
Very romantic picture...great work
Regards
STERY

merhaba my friend marco
wonderful colours and magnificent silhouettes.
well done.
best regards.

Ciao romantico Marco :o)
Splendid shot full of great mood ... warm colours ... i love the ambiance just near the sea ! Sun, ... which collapse in the earth for lighten more our lives on next days ! Very strong note, i like to read you ... and a great thanks for making me discover so wonderful songs ;o)
I enjoy better your new police and the way you write the title.
Excellent work 'Monsieur Počte' :o)
Baci
Marylou

Buenas noches Marco,
Una foto estupenda, las siluetas están muy bien... me gusta!
Felicidades, y gracias por compartirla!
Mical *

  • Great 
  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1557 W: 0 N: 172] (11971)
  • [2007-08-21 16:01]
  • [2]

Hello Marco!
Your photographs are as your notes which accompanies it, full of poetry. It's easy to let our imagination be looking at this photograph to the warm color. Great work my new favorites friend :) I like it. Thanks
Best regards
Diane

Hi Marco

Lovely shots and great poem....

Amri HMS

  • Great 
  • mansua Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 701 W: 35 N: 24] (2053)
  • [2007-08-21 18:27]

Muy bello atardecer.
Me encanta la luz y la sobras.
Felicitaciones Marco.
Saludos.

great composition !
Bravo,
Gerardo.

  • Great 
  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 506 W: 34 N: 41] (5696)
  • [2007-08-21 19:33]

Hi Marco,
I have been thinking that your dark photos are more tasteful than day-light photos for me...why?
perhaps you may feel something important in the dark of night or evening. and this feeling may be so delicate that strong day-light must hide it. I think it may be the pathetic fate of human...this beautifulness of the sky with setting sun suggest that meaning.
also silhouettes of people suggest something invisible under the day-light, that may be the calm minds, every people surely has those, but during the busy time all lose it...
thank you
Akihisa

Beautiful, simply beautiful, a few impressive colors, and the silhouette of the persons they do mas spectacularly your photo.

Regards

hello! great shot!fantastic compo!excellent work! TFS
Aga

Wonderful colors, fantastic shot!

Hello Marco,
A superb capture of the people that have come to watch this fine sunset!
Good silhouettes, and the imnage has a well balanced composition...
Attractive colours, well exposed!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2084 W: 379 N: 2234] (22646)
  • [2007-08-22 1:34]
  • [2]

merhaba Marco;
vernyice captured.super light and colors..bravo..selamlar

  • Great 
  • sadenu (46)
  • [2007-08-22 1:56]

Hola Marco
Bello aterdecer, maravillosas las siluetas que lo observan. Muy buena composicion.
Saludos
Sara

  • Great 
  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2050 W: 59 N: 2082] (12613)
  • [2007-08-22 2:18]

Hi Marco...
Excellent sun-set shot, i like it, sharpness, colous and very beautiful view.
George

Hello Marco,

Very nice collection of silhouettes!! I added a workshop to make them look more harsh and a bit of noise reduction. Hope you like it.

Greetings! Dennis

Halo marco..
Wawww...aber diese Bilder ist echt wunderschon ghemacht!
Gute POV und auch super farbe..
L.G.
Ella
:)

Hello Marco,

Wonderful shot.
The human silhauttes on sunset BG looks wonderful. TFS

Vandana
follows

  • Great 
  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2361 W: 0 N: 722] (12557)
  • [2007-08-22 5:39]

hola Marco,
perfecto trabajo y sensacional siluetas,
los tonos y la compo excelente,
saludos.
:) pt

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1650 W: 0 N: 1] (10591)
  • [2007-08-22 8:28]

Wow Marco Wunderbar, Beautiful.
Gr Jos

  • Great 
  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2007-08-22 8:45]

Ciao Marco,

Your composition against the twilight sun is magnificient. A beautiful atmosphere has been presented in this warm image. Silhouettes of the people are interesting along with a beautiful piece of poetry. Well done my friend.

Thanks for sharing this image.

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3266 W: 79 N: 2548] (17273)
  • [2007-08-22 9:00]
  • [2]

Ola Marco.
Gorgeous photo of the crowd looking at sunset.
Very well captured and presented.
Best wishes, Jan

well..well..well...
Excellent shot Marco
great sunset and all compo
well done
Alina

hi marco,
a fantastic scene within a fantastic ambiance !
waiting for the sun going down.
great silhouettes, perfectly focused.
love that warm red light and the darknessa lready around.
excellent and beautiful moody composition !
great note too !
thanks - carole

Hello Marco

Excllent composure with great details very crisp well done on the colors bG POV DOF excellent work

TFS Kyle

Hi Marco..great composition and superb lighting...very nice.

Roger

What a fantastic light and frame for this shot. The golden soft light over the silhouettes of people is well captured.
Best wishes,
Achim

  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3266 W: 265 N: 6108] (22766)
  • [2007-08-23 4:23]
  • [2]

A superb sunset shot: it looks very companionable and friendly with all those people in the foreground.
Superb colours and details
And congratulations on your 2,000 points!
TFs
silke
:D

ok.... just very very good
la canzone ti ha ispirato.? o il video?
o la tua foto ti ha fatto pensare alla canzone, in ogni caso veramente bella, hai un aria molto romantica.... che sei ispirato ultimamente^
ciao
e

Ciao Marco,
intersting shot with many subjects in it :) I like the idea, angle of shot, framing and colors. Nicely seen and presented to us. TFS

Have a lovely day!
Ioana

Hi Marco,
The light and contrast are perfect in this picture, although the picture suffers a bit of the visible noise (the use of Neat Iamge might improve the picture) Anyway the conmpsoition, the idea all superb! A really attractive posting mio amicio!
TFS
Hans

:) Later...

Pryvitanne Marco!
Beautiful!Nice colours!ALL made very good!
ALiaksandr

Interesting sunset - good idea:)
TFS
I greet
mz

Great image - looks like a beach party is about to happen!
Cheers
Otto

Ciao Marco,
che bella foto, quel cielo scuro che si illumina a cerchi concentrici fino a rischiarare le ombre delle persone! Colori davvero ben dosati, senza parti troppo scure o sovraesposte. E il soggetto č naturale, per nulla artefatto. Bel lavoro!
Ciao, e goditi Mantova.
Violetta

I like the way it is present! Letterings are simple but with wise presentation!
The light and shadows... It's just that but in a rich way, warm tones... powerfully large radiant

  • Great 
  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 683 W: 0 N: 153] (3848)
  • [2007-08-29 10:36]

Ciao Marco
I first thought of people gathering to watch martians get off a flying saucer!
Most spectacular picture liven up by admirers amd fine location of silhouettes on the lower tiers line.
Ciao.
Robert

  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2457 W: 51 N: 2860] (13522)
  • [2007-09-02 6:58]

Ciao Marco,
Artistically and Professional. Class a photo, with fantastischen colors. A wonderful composition, super light and detail.
Best regards.
Janusz

Hi Marco,
How can I comment on this one, except to say you captured the moment extremely well with people in different poses, making pictures, relaxing, enjoying - yes most of all enjoying the moment as I do while watching your picture.
TFS
Els

Marco Beautiful colours and details on this lovely nocturnal shot! TFS
John T

Hello Marco,
This is beautiful, I love the color and the silhoettes of all the people in the foreground are awesome...TFS
Donna:o)

Hello Marco.

Excellent picture, nice composition and colors.
Beautiful silhouetes.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

Hi Marco,
this is really impressive ! Excellent mood composition and use of the backlighting. Very good results. It seems a bit noisy though..??

Best regards, Daniel

is that joke?
I didn't saw that shot before i gave u PT..collapse the light into the earth..
It's really strange...
Maybe i shouldn't see also your pics cos with every new that i discover i find myslef there.
Shocking ..
Ciao
A

hello Marco
wonderful shot
beautiful hue and tones
i like the dark highlights of humans here
wonderful capture, great idea.
Nice Title.

regards
Manuj Mehta

Ciao Marco! Amazing scene. Wonderful POV. Fantastic light and shadow. Good capture. Very original work. Good luck! Saude!

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