A shadow in water

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• pdp (538)
• [2007-08-27 7:56]

Hello Ricardo,

I think I can see what you were tryign to do here. If I may I would like to tell you my opinion on how to improve this shot. Firstly, the shadow could be longer into the frame, there is only a hint of shadow here and it needs to be in a dominant position to work. The focus here seems a little bit soft - perhaps you had some camera shake? If so then I would recommend using a tripod, you can pick up basic ones fairly cheaply. Finally, I think the photo lacks a little contrast and this would be easily rectified in PP. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

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• Black_Dog (3212)
• [2007-09-16 13:56]

Hola Ricardo! Very good! Marvelous!