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Desert Street


Desert Street
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Copyright: Ricardo Lopes (wasader) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 181 W: 4 N: 29] (437)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-30
Categories: Architecture, Experimental, Nocturnal
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/4 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-30 13:18
Viewed: 373
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This shot have a little things how make the photo bad!
How can I make it better?

This street at night is a great place to take photos.
Is a calm street and we can see the river Tejo!

I hope you like it and if you can help me with this things!

samansarraf, WMcK, molas, eyesthetix, mikolaj_cava, azaf1 has marked this note useful
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Hi Ricardo
Wow, it’s an interesting photo and I think it’s well done. In my idea, all of the parameters are acceptable and everything is OK. I hope for you a good continuation.
Good luck
Thanks for sharing
Saman

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 747 W: 11 N: 1599] (6210)
  • [2007-10-01 3:21]

Ricardo-

I love how the cars refelect in the window, very interesting. I like also how the street goes of to the distance. Nice.
TFS
Wanda

Hi Ricardo,
nice idea and thought - however my views are:
1. The edge of the window 'cuts' the picture in to two in an unattractive manner - in other words the composition could be greatly improved by panning the camera much more toward the right.

2. I think F/2.8 (and without a very suitable support) makes things really troublesome with lowlight shots just like this here. I'll recommend smaller apertures (like F/6.5 upwards) unless you absolutely are sure about what you are doing.

3. And this brings us to my final point: A tripod or very suitable support - to help you keep the camera perfectly still during the exposure. This way you'll be well able to use smaller apertures -for greater DOF and lower ISO - eliminating noise.

I do hope this helps.. have fun.
Best regards, Daniel

Ola Ricardo! I was in Palacio Ajuda! I love Ajuda district and Belem district. Wonderful place. Good picture. Original perspective. Mysterious atmosphere!

Wow! Amazing reflections. Original picture. Lisboa is beautiful by night!!!

Hi Wasader! Very original composition. Good darkness. Good effect. Hasta la victoria siempre!

Hi Ricardo,
What a great night shot.POV, colours and light are nice.WelldoneTFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Hello Ricardo,
The image is well composed and has good colours!
The weakness is probably the lacking sharpness, and a tripod will help out a lot...
Withe longer exposures you'll not only improve sharpness but also get better clarity in colours!
Greetings,
Pablo -

hello Ricardo,

how r u? nice shot u got here.. :)

tfs and greeting, terry

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5039 W: 178 N: 5894] (31479)
  • [2007-10-18 4:51]

Olá Ricardo,

É sem duvida uma bela foto.
Mas tenho que concordar com Daniel (eyesthetix )
ele é fera em materia de fotografia noturnas. Voce já foi ver a pagina dele?
Creio que é fazendo que a gente vai aprendendo.
Vai firme garoto!
Parabens

Sergio

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 322 W: 2 N: 43] (2748)
  • [2007-11-19 20:16]

Hi Ricardo.Interesting picture and not too bad.Maybe next it will better.
Best regards, Bosko.

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 40 N: 631] (6412)
  • [2007-11-20 6:42]

First, I don't know what kind of gear you have, like lens, and camera.
= But one thing I guess, is trying to use a bigger F. 8 and above will do good.

= second, try to shot it where the sky has some bluish colour in it. or its not too dark. third,

= since you have to increase the F, then it will make the shutter speed slower. Then you have to use tripod to prevent shaking or blurry.

= and finally if you can shot with raw mode, then you better shot it with raw. because if you have unappropriate white balance, or you can to change the mood with white balance, then you can change it in post processing, or even reduce or increase the expossure. Hope this help

Yan

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 566 W: 40 N: 632] (3970)
  • [2007-11-25 13:52]

Hi Ricardo
Excellent night shot with great perspective and mood
well done
Argiris

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  • mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 478 W: 226 N: 353] (4423)
  • [2007-12-14 21:43]

Oi Ricardo,

Penso que te referes ás cores vermelhas e á falta de nitidez?
O mais importante é teres apoio para a câmara. Como tems pouca luz e utilizas um tempo de abertura longo qualquer movimento da câmara faz a foto tremida. Neste caso podes apoiar a câmara na janela e utilizar o "timer", porque se não quando carregas no botão já estas a mover a câmara.

Para teres cores diferentes podes experimentar escolher um "White Balance" diferente.

Abraço,
Pedro

Ricardo

nostalgica y luz perfecta te deso FELIZ AÑO

nat

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