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A maquina evolui


A maquina evolui
Photo Information
Copyright: Bert Hoetmer (bertolucci) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 1 N: 26] (175)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-10
Categories: Transportation, Artwork
Camera: Olympus C-8080 WZ, 28-140mm/2.4-3.2 int, SanDisk CF 512M
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Sato: The Mechanical Bride, Sato: Per Ardua ad Astra (Space/Science Fiction) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-08 7:36
Viewed: 1218
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A maquina evolui

This pic is taken in the Sao Sebastiao quarter, near the Jardim Amalia Rodrigues in Lisboa. A billboard against the backdrop of a building site.
No further comments on the content..…..please interpret/associate freely ;-)

I added the original photo as a WS after Rob's crit.

PCS tech: perspective distortion corrected, cropped, copied the ‘eyes’ to a new layer, increased the saturation (decreased the yellow hues) of this layer, desaturated the main layer, adjusted contrast and levels USM-ed added a frame saved for the web.


exif data

Camera Manufacturer : OLYMPUS CORPORATION
Camera Model : C8080WZ
Exposure time [s] : 10/4000
F-Number : F4.0
Exposure program : Aperture priority (3)
ISO speed ratings : 50
Date taken : 2005:03:10 15:23:42
Exposure bias value : 0/10
Metering mode : Multi-segment (5)
Focal length [mm] : 30.5000
Colour space : sRGB
Image width : 3264
Image length : 2448

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To alvaraalto: thanx & original addedbertolucci 1 04-11 17:28
To jhm: Hi John!bertolucci 1 04-10 17:10
To chiaraluna: Mazda teaserbertolucci 1 04-08 17:23
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Awesome! Excellent composition and PP work! Great idea. I really like this one. The abstract patterns on the building are great. Good job. JP

hi Bert :) very interesting graphic composition here! so have you've been off to Portugal then or is this an older photo? i really like the strong contrast of vertical and horizontal lines and that billboard is certainly a striking feature to inspire a shot! mmmm.. don't speak portugese so i'm very curious as to what it avertises... the mind boggles! ihih ^_^

take care Bert and great shot!

Ayda

The building has interesting design to it. the billboard looks like a robot from a Science fiction film.

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8649)
  • [2005-04-08 18:41]

Excellent composition! Very original and creative! Nice piece of art! Congrats!

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  • Maru Gold Star Critiquer [C: 471 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-04-08 20:08]

Hello Bert,
what an impressive compositon, so strong and graphic..
The B&W enhace the powerful composition.
Congrats!!
Marisa

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-04-08 22:58]

Une machine évoluée dans un monde évolué ...belle composition froide pour un futur urbanistique qui ne promet rien de bon!
Antonio

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 258 W: 0 N: 97] (531)
  • [2005-04-09 2:11]
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Dag Bert,
Ik wist niet dat U ook op TL te zien was, ik vind toch een beetje gebouw weer in uw foto, uw voorliefde dus.
Bert geen punten geven aan mij want ik werk hier al maanden niet meer op deze site.
Groeten,
John

Hi Bert,
Interessant werk. Het lijkt wel uit 2 aparte delen te bestaan. Ik ben eigenlijk wel nieuwsgierig naar het origineel.
groet Rob

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2005-04-13 14:26]

It seems to me the aliens are advertising on TL ... very nice capture Bert ! like the symmetry here with the B/W !!

A very nice composition Bert, I like it a lot. The b&w is a very good choice.
Best regards
Guy

I dig this...

Very nicely seen and presented.

Great lines here.

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