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Wish..


Wish..
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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 67 N: 2508] (10993)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Nature, Decisive Moment, Abstract, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS-DX
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Vandana's Favorites II, Friday theme 2008/03/21 "Flight", Marco's Feelings, Skies of Portugal [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-03-21 16:31
Viewed: 1025
Favorites: 6 [view]
Points: 147
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Wish..

I wish I was a hunter in search of different food
I wish I was the animal which fits into that mood
I wish i was a person with unlimited breath
I wish I was a heartbeat that never comes to rest
I wish I was a stranger who wanders down the sky
I wish I was a starship in silence flying by
I wish I was a princess with armies at her hand
I wish I was a ruler who'd make them understand
I wish I was a writer who sees what's yet unseen
I wish i was a prayer expressing what I mean
I wish I was a forest of trees that do not hide
I wish I was a clearing no secrets left inside

come to me.. (komm zu mir)..
I don’t need you more than you need me..


my contribution to the Friday theme.. Flight
run Lola run is my mood..

Lola teaches us..
a firm wish is enough.. to learn to fly..
;)

Comments and critics are welcome..


P.S. it's easter time.. my best "wishes" to you
.

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questa me la ricordo...caro Martigno...agua sghelada...
Sei un vero romantico, a parte questo la foto è bella, calma ..colori splendidi..
Insomma , in pieno stile Urfaust

TFS

Marto

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 373 W: 114 N: 620] (4119)
  • [2008-03-21 16:39]

Woow, Marco, a very beautiful shot!! "prachtig" is the dutch word for it!
The bird makes it alive and complete!!
Warm colours and a perfect sun!

Well done!
Janneke

Hi Marco,
Amazing photo. Excellent composition and coloured presentation. Harmony of atmosphere, colours, lightning. Well done. TFS. Stev

Beutiful colors and light. Well composed and presented. TFS.

John

This is so peaceful.
Thanks for sharing such an lovely composition.

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 114] (1468)
  • [2008-03-21 18:31]

Ciao Marco,
Bella foto. Superb photo. Beautiful sunset. Very good compositions. Very beautiful poem. Your cold mood? Love this song. Bravo !
I wish..
Happy Easter.
Ciao, Zsú

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  • prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 98 W: 67 N: 80] (464)
  • [2008-03-21 18:43]

Hi Marco,
A very deep and inspirational image to look at here. The image alone is powerful in itself to say all the things in your note and much, much more. The composition is simply perfection. Everything works in harmony - the low light, the soft colours, the sharply defined bird and the sun, the border and even the font you have chosen for the title. Excellent work.
Roxanne

Hi Marco,
I love your sunset and well presented and composed seascape, beautiful colours and sharp picture, Nice note too, good for the theme,
Have a good Easter weekend
Michel

Hi Marco,

Great shot and great note . .
Lovely scene here . . You did great composing it . .
Perfect moment capturing this sunset . .
Perfect moment to make a wish

Tfs,
TJutjut

Simple, great and beautiful POV. nice shot.TFS

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1866 W: 127 N: 3024] (16581)
  • [2008-03-21 23:55]

Hi Macro,

beautiful shot, so full of mood, excellent poem too, very nice colours and composition, :D

Cheers,
Sweety

Helo Marco!
Happy Easter!!! ;)
Really beautiful mood and lovely composition for Fridays theme!
Nice sunset and good point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2929 W: 271 N: 6375] (24355)
  • [2008-03-22 3:25]

This is simply exquisite!
superb mood, wonderful colours
I LOVE it!
TFS
silke
Happy Easter to you too

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1268 W: 0 N: 184] (12962)
  • [2008-03-22 4:26]

Ciao Marco,
Fantastico! A landscape to make dream. Excellente composition, i like it! Adequate note which accompanies it :))) Happy easter time to you Marco
Ciao
Diane

beautiful tones, simplicity and beauty in this shot :)
regards
jo

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3059 W: 97 N: 3327] (20653)
  • [2008-03-22 5:26]

Ciao Marco.
Fantastic sunset picture.
Wish I could fly fly like this bird.
Ciao ciao from Jan

Excellent work Marco !
Well done.
Best regards, Daniel

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 385 N: 2375] (25770)
  • [2008-03-22 6:42]

Hello my friend Marco...
Great shot - nice and peaceful - very good colours.
Selamlar

just super
TFS
Cynthia

Hi Marco,

Very thought provoking photo. Beautiful composition, beautiful colors, very serene and peaceful.

Nice addition to theme, Lisa

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1181 W: 63 N: 873] (13295)
  • [2008-03-22 11:00]

Hi Marco,
amazing and romantic shot.I liked harmony of the colours and bird.TFS.Necla.

ciao Marco,
un post che va dritto al cuore....
buona Pasqua....

sERGIO

merhaba dear marco
wonderful colours.excellent seagull and sun.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Marco,
Excellent my friend, great moodish imapression, superb capture of the bird against the awesome sky.
A fine contribution to the "flight theme"!
Bravisimo mio amico! Grazie.
Hans

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 48 N: 2973] (14442)
  • [2008-03-22 14:44]

iao Marco, what a amanzing atmosphere of your beautiful sunset.Beautiful moment and composition my friend.What a harmny colours and light.
Excellent shot.
Thanks and beautiful greetings.
Janusz

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 104 W: 0 N: 65] (1153)
  • [2008-03-22 15:49]

Ciao Marco,
Joyeuses Pâques à toi aussi!
Vraiment une photo comme moi je les aimes. La paix, le calme, la mer et le soleil font bon ménages. Ca vient me chercher à l'intérieur. Ca calme mes démons et ça me donne de l'énergie positive. Les couleurs, la composition, le timing tout était là au bon moment. Bravo
Jasmine

Hello Marco,
Pleasure to be first one on this :-)
Excellent photo, and beautiful composition and colors.
Nice note to go with. TFS
Vandana
later

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 556 W: 34 N: 55] (7104)
  • [2008-03-22 18:06]

Hi Marco,
a calm and tender view of setting sun on the sea.
perhaps this sentimental situation made you feel "wish" in your note. and this flying bird stimulated your imagination so much. your "wish"s are rhetorically telling your life and your presence...
but I like simple non-describable view, after all your lots of note must show me this non-describable feeling in this your shot, in my feeling.
thank you,
Akihisa

I saw that movie "run Lola run" a while ago and I got tired just by looking at her running and running, but I like the words of that song. Nevertheless, with this photo you say much more. Beautiful sunset, peaceful mood/atmosphere, following our path, going to our destiny, always guided from something/someone that is not in this earth, but inside of us. Excellent contribution. TFS

Lorena

hello Marco,

superb entry to this week theme.. i just love the colours.. beautiful sunsets, sea, moon and of course the bird flight.. the combination are fantastic.. excellent capture with very fine detail and sharpness.. well done.

have a lovely easter and weekend.

regards, terry

Buna Marco
O fotografie bine realizata si un POV de exceptie.
Imi place- NE place!
ALex si Ella

Hello Marco,
Excellent mood as usual. I like of centre position of thre sun and seagull.
Thought provocating poem... Congratulations
Selahattin E

Ciao marco, splendido tramonto arricchito dall'uccello in volo, magnifici colori, ottima composizione, bravo, Buona Pasqua, ciao Silvio

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1787 W: 75 N: 0] (19850)
  • [2008-03-23 3:01]

Ciao Marco ;)))
Amazing soft-strong colors...simplicity and beauty...TFS
All the best,
J ;)

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3674 W: 218 N: 3874] (29464)
  • [2008-03-23 4:33]

Ciao Marco

A marvellous sunset with nice symmetry between the silhouetted bird, & the orb of the sun. Wonderful orange colours. Bellisimo, & Happy Easter!

Imperdonabile, questa mi era sfuggita!
Foto molto bella, as usual, ma la nota d'accompagnamento è a dir poco magnifica e, direi, energizzante!
Non è che Lola è un Doktor Faustus dei nostri giorni? ;-)
Ciao, Antonella

Hi Marco,
What a superb sunset shot.Excellent colours, light and ambiance.TFS.
Ciao,

hAyAti

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2926 W: 623 N: 3485] (15930)
  • [2008-03-23 8:06]
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Hi Sérgio,
These purple and orange tones are perfectly in harmony! The bird flying to the sky, the sun falling down too!
Excellent addition at the theme. Your text transcends the sense of the flight. The desire is the beginning of any dream, the flight, its realization. Congratulations and Happy Easter! Annie

:)

Hello Marco

What a stunning image, beautiful scenery and tones with a superb modern feel to it. A very peaceful and calming mood here and interesting notes too

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1326 W: 1 N: 144] (12770)
  • [2008-03-23 8:53]

beautifol text and picture

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1610 W: 129 N: 2782] (10712)
  • [2008-03-23 9:24]

hi Marco

Very nicely captured warm colors of sunset and great mood with the bird above the sun.

Great work. TFS
bill

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1531 W: 139 N: 2160] (19466)
  • [2008-03-23 10:36]

Hello Marco, very nice shot of this great sunset. The composition is very well done and the bird is a big plus. Sharp details and nice colors, very well doen,thanks!

Mario

Hi dear friend,
I wish that we could be much more happy with ourselves that we are...
beautiful contribution to the theme. It's a pleasure to admire it and read the note.
Well done Marco! As usual, a meaningful posting.
Happy Easter to you too!
Best wishes,
Ioana

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 73 N: 1908] (7719)
  • [2008-03-23 17:57]

Hello Marco,
Great photo; fantastic colours and a very melancolic effect. The gradient between the water and the sky is fantastic and the fly in the clearest part was a very precise shot.
Very well done. My regards, jmb

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1444 W: 121 N: 3653] (14953)
  • [2008-03-23 18:40]

Hello Marco.. the words are very powerful..but the link puts is all together.... My wish is this one for my 13 yo daughter " wish I was a princess with armies at her hand"
Really just a wonderful image for the theme or any day! the sun setting and your luck to catch the gull is wonderful!

Tricia...
ps.. happy Easter.. our day is winding down... kids in bed its 930pm here... school tomorrow! :(

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3148 W: 683 N: 2097] (16843)
  • [2008-03-24 0:27]

What a wonderful mood !


thanks,
v

Hi Marco, this is so pure and simple.
Beautiful colours and composition.
This is a great sunset!

Cheers! :)

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2084 W: 60 N: 3032] (15815)
  • [2008-03-24 6:13]

Hi Marco...
I love Sunsets, this one tooo...
Beautiful shot, nice colors, contrast - note too...
Well done, and well presented...
Rgd, George

Hi Marco,

You sure know how to create the perfect atmosphere in which to show of this bird in flight.
Fantastic!

TFS
Els

beautiful composition Marco, a classic one,sharp with wonderful warm colors, two thumbs up my friend.
regards from Dubai.............andres

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2816 W: 363 N: 2725] (11788)
  • [2008-03-24 14:32]

Ah Marco, what a beauty. I love sunsets, and I really appreciate birds in flight... so this combinations works wonders for me. Compo is cool, light is well controlled and colours are great. A beauty.
TFS

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-03-24 15:32]

Hi Marco.
Great picture here presented during easter time.
Very interesting and effective.
I like note too!
Don`t worry about your trip. Someday ...
Take your time.
Best Regards.
Janek Kloss

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 600 W: 79 N: 629] (4223)
  • [2008-03-25 0:56]

Ciao Marco!
Sunsets are kaleidoscope different, but surely, this one is among the most inspiring.
Best wishes!
Anton

I love that film :)
Who has told u about it:)?
Casino scene is great also the whole idea and how they made mixes with cartoon, just brilliant JOB!!
My fav subject of all should be constant subject here on TL!
Sprechen Sie Deutsch?
I have a mental barrier to think in german!! as it should be as A POLE:D
KIss

Ania

Doesn't get any better than this Marco.
A superb sunset perfectly resolved, the bird is an added bonus,
excellent colors and framing.
Well done.
- Vincent

Hi Marco,

Oh, I just LOVE the plit second photo sessions in Lola Rennt!! Off course, as a Dutchman, I'm watching the original German version.

Here is a link to the German trailer! Very nice photograph as well, though I would not have immediately made the link to the film ;-). Though I do with your note!

Greetings,
Dennis

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 707 W: 37 N: 1604] (10656)
  • [2008-03-25 16:49]

Hi Marco,
BEAUTIFUL-- that's it, simply beautiful. Best wishes and TFS Julie

Ciao Marco,

wow! Quanto hai pagato il gabbiano per piazzarsi così bene? Splendide sfumature di colori, il disco del sole è sorprendente!

Complimenti!

Gio

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1410 W: 0 N: 1] (11578)
  • [2008-03-27 5:43]

Hi Marco
beautiful classic sunset.
Gr Jos

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2008-03-27 6:43]

Ciao mio bello amico Marco,

I can imagine the strength of mood at the place where you took this shot. A magnificient moment has been captured with excellent timing and placement of the flying bird. Powerful shot my friend, fantastic view. A master piece my friend, well done.

I want to follow that sun which is going down far away in the horrizon, I want to feel its warmness, I want to go far far beyond the horrizone.

Thanks for sharing feelings in a visual form.

Hello marco,
awww beauuutiiifulll!! Love the color, the view, the poem, excellenta!
TFS
Donna:o)

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1033 W: 0 N: 1055] (9862)
  • [2008-03-30 12:50]

Your note is very good,but the photo is like a a thunderstorm!
Fantastic.
jan

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  • salmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 850 W: 5 N: 430] (4732)
  • [2008-03-31 2:03]

Hello Marco,
Excelent picture, lovely composition...it's like a dream...congrats!
Thanks,
Mihaela

Hi Marco
Wonderful image with beautiful nostalgic view on end of this day..
I wish.....
TFS
Cheers,Braca

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1306 W: 31 N: 1602] (9855)
  • [2008-03-31 13:13]

Hi Marco

This has a beautiful mood. Lovely colour tones, wonderful light and beautifully composed

TFS

Karan

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 2 N: 111] (3667)
  • [2008-03-31 14:32]
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Ciao Marco, una foto più romantica non si può, atmosfera proprio da "esprimi un desiderio", mi piace proprio. Nella tua nota mi ha fatto pensare "I don’t need you more than you need me..", sembrerebbe un wish da niente, invece è il massimo che si può chiedere..

Ciao Marco :o)

I have so many wishes in my mind .... at the moment, i would like to be this bird ... to be able to flirt with the sunbeams, with the sea ... certainly i would be fine.
Excellent job as usual and great note ...thanks Marco ;)
Baci
Marylou
;) later

It is a classical work.

Sweet!

R

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  • tafa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 149 W: 3 N: 124] (1375)
  • [2008-06-12 12:03]

HI
Great shot, This is a picturesque and very impressive shot, composition is perfect, like a postcard. Beautiful work, Congratulations. Have a nice day.
SASO
...MACEDONIA...

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  • zomik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 199 W: 60 N: 180] (2447)
  • [2008-06-25 3:47]

Hi Marco,
This photograph is so economical into details that I will also only say - very beautiful...

TFS
Zofia

Hello Marco. Simplicity at its best. Beautiful changing hues with two subject balances well in the frame. Well composed and very well done. Regards. Jusni

This is so very beautiful,so very romantic,so very emotive..and your Note is just amazing:)

ti abbraccio caro amico
biljana

This is a very simple image, but really rich as connotations and mood transmitted, Marco.
Somehow, I feel a part of this, I feel the water moving in your shot, the soft dancing of the light on the waves...and I say this without making fun of you, or the image...
Maybe I am just really tired and I needed this relaxing escape. ;)
Take care,
Diana

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