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Sorry but sometimes I miss the chaos


Sorry but sometimes I miss the chaos
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Copyright: Teresat Teresat (Teresat) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 802 W: 46 N: 1148] (4304)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-29
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Panasonic FZ18
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-20 6:46
Viewed: 555
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 104
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I miss... an human feeling who doesn´t understand why he cares and love to be lost and to forget that it must follow the rules. Maybe in our last moment we all get time to be free. It´s great to feel alive!

I dedicated this photo to a Great Portuguese writer: Herberto Helder
"...........................
............................
And they shout and batter. He batters her with his lover
spirit. And she is battered and batters him
with her spirit of the beloved.
Then the world transforms into this harsh noise
of love.While overhead
the silence of the lover and the beloved feed
the surprising silence of the world and of love."

© Translation: 2002, Assírio & Alvim


Herberto was born in Funchal in 1930.

It has been a pleasure to me to listening some of his poems for manny times by an Portuguese actor: Diogo Dória ( maybe you have seen him in some Manuel de Oliveira movies).


PS- If you are in S. jorge castel you look not to the river but to the down land your eyes should see this image.

T.

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Howdy Teresat!
Very interesting cityscape. Nice colors. Good capture.
Regards!

Dear Teresat!
Amazing shot. Wonderful POV. Nice lightness. Original composition. Fantastic work.
Cheers!

Hello T
An unexpected view of Lisbon, less «pretty» and more caotic and very human, with «rural fragments» hiden in his heart. Only who knows can find them. Fantastic colours and compo.~
Congrats, mb

Hi Teresat. This is a nicely composed shot of Lisbon..great details and colors.

Roger

Nice composition and DOF. Love the note.
Cheers,
Abraços,
Wellington

hi Teresat

This pov really shows the different tones of color contrast from bright to dull walls, good display of living under diverse conditions of urban living.

tfs, bill

Hello Teresat,
Brilliant point of view of this part of Lisbon.
Lovely bright colors of the roofs and
the details of the wall and windows are incredible.
Simply beautiful.

Best regards,
Sharina

Hi Teresat,

Good document.
Well framed, revealing a part of the city.
Excellent.

jp

Sorry but I never miss caos!!!
but your kaos is good to catch
nice result of this coours and not ordered houses
well done
ciao
Lucio

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  • roald Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 40 W: 53 N: 26] (402)
  • [2008-05-20 8:27]

hi teresat.

amazing! like the architecture a lot, specially the colour and the POV. so natural, so real.

roald

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 0 N: 155] (1411)
  • [2008-05-20 9:23]

Olá Teresa,

adorei o teu caos! Esta foto está muito bem conseguida! Grande olho, por vezes é mesmo preciso olhar para baixo...

Beijos,
Romeu

Hello Teresat!
Good composition! Beautiful details and colors! Nice note!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

Hi Teresa
Very interesting place and lovey shot.
Excellent colours and composition.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings
H.Ayhan

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3345 W: 86 N: 2709] (17909)
  • [2008-05-20 11:30]
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Me Casa is Me Castle, right Teresat ?
Colourful picture of of thise top part of Lisboa.
No doubt it is you, who took this shot.
Good looking Terasat.
Have a lovely evening,
Jan

amazing combination of abandoned buildings (with the "for sale" signs looking quite incongruous) with a fantastic palette of colours and different frames, and contrast with the terraced gardens , the almost new building (how the hanging laudry declares its livelihood and positive human presence in the face of the decay nextdoor!!)
and the almost elegant house in the background
how long befor edevelopers rob it form its soul in favour of new saleable soul less boxes??
another winner and another fantastic note my friend
best regards
anna

Hello Teresat,
Nice photo, nice and good composition and again nice photo I have never been in Portugal but from photos of Portugal I have to say the Porugal is very beautiful state with beautiful architecture and with a lot of beautiful places with beautifuuuuuuuuuuul colours, I have to go there in the future... at this photo I like the teracced composition of the place and also vizualization of the small streets there I like it ...
My Best Regards
Rastislav

That ruined building at the bottom of the frame would make a terrific setting for a photo shoot with a model! A shame New Zealand is so well-maintained (or out-of-bounds, they put 'trespassers will be prosecuted' signs everywhere.)
Very much a trademark photo in your gallery, an interesting montage of cityscape.
Rew

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2178 W: 59 N: 2397] (13651)
  • [2008-05-20 21:31]

Hi, hi dear Teresat...
Another nice shot - very interesting photo and noteportrait.!
I really appreciate, to share it with us...
Greetings,
George

good morning my friend teresat
wonderful lovely houses. wonderful lovely colours and composition.well done.
friendly greetings from Istanbul.
gürkan akçakır.

ciao Teresa..
forms and detail well taken!! intersting and effective capture!
ciao Marco

Hi Teresat, fascinating urban view, great composition with splendid colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

Morning,Teresat !
This view has his sweet heartache that we name- love.
Lena

Hi Teresat,
Interesting portrayal of contrast as shown by the new and old buildings. Well captured and composed. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 98 W: 2 N: 40] (1131)
  • [2008-05-21 2:15]

Beautiful my dear friend !
Marvelous POV and superb frame
Wonderful colors and a nice non caotic atmosphere!

It's real great to feel alive
Herberto's poem is fanyastic.
My congratulations
Ambracos
Argyris

Olá Teresinhat

Linda foto querida.
Posso ver nela um detalhe de uma foto anterior.Cores fabulosas dessa linda palete "Lisboa".

Belíssima dedicatória

Health,love and joy...

Beijinhos

JDiogo

Ps: please - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIuS_lzb5b8&NR=1

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  • jazmin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 984 W: 63 N: 323] (6729)
  • [2008-05-21 12:17]

Hi, Teresat!

Intereting and speial shot and note. Beautiful compositipn and POV.

TFS,

jazmin

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 321 W: 2 N: 43] (2754)
  • [2008-05-21 14:04]

Hi Teresat.Very interesting city detail.
Best regards, Bosko.

Very well coloured POV.

Roberto

Lovely rich colours Teresat. The blurred branches and leaves look good, well compoosed and lovely detail. TFS,
David

Olá Teresat,

Uma fotografia marcante, com suas fortes e belas cores. Uma linda homenagem, graças à qual travo meu primeiro contacto com Herberto.

Sobre um Poema

Um poema cresce inseguramente
na confusão da carne,
sobe ainda sem palavras, só ferocidade e gosto,
talvez como sangue
ou sombra de sangue pelos canais do ser.

Fora existe o mundo. Fora, a esplêndida violência
ou os bagos de uva de onde nascem
as raízes minúsculas do sol.
Fora, os corpos genuínos e inalteráveis
do nosso amor,
os rios, a grande paz exterior das coisas,
as folhas dormindo o silêncio,
as sementes à beira do vento,
- a hora teatral da posse.
E o poema cresce tomando tudo em seu regaço.

E já nenhum poder destrói o poema.
Insustentável, único,
invade as órbitas, a face amorfa das paredes,
a miséria dos minutos,
a força sustida das coisas,
a redonda e livre harmonia do mundo.

- Em baixo o instrumento perplexo ignora
a espinha do mistério.
- E o poema faz-se contra o tempo e a carne.

Grande abraço e OPC,
Sergio

:) quinta-feira

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3336 W: 684 N: 1925] (16099)
  • [2008-05-22 4:27]

Maybe the branches in the FG are a bit disturbing but this is another great cityscape of yours

v

Hi Teresat,

Lovely presentation of those houses . . so colorful and wonderful view . .
Well done

Tfs,
TJutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on For Rew and Haldian .

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1514 W: 1 N: 131] (11741)
  • [2008-05-22 10:17]

een echt voorbeeld van "chaos"
wonder veel groen in die straten

Hola Teresat,

Que buenas composiciones de estas maravillosas fachadas nos presentas, como siempre excelentes texturas y colores. Muy buen trabajo.

Saludos,

Pako

Beautiful portrait of the houses.

Ola Teresat,
Linda composicao,gosto dos telhados e suas cores.
Interessantes arquiteturas.
Abracos,
Ralf

Hi dear friend,
totally agree with you: "It's great to feel alive!"
Wonderful composition and note.
You still amaze me with your postings.
Best wishes,
Ioana
:) soon

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1834 W: 65 N: 0] (17433)
  • [2008-05-26 1:40]

Ola Teresat ;)Great cascade composition and colors, TFS
Best,
J ;)

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 731 W: 8 N: 1663] (6414)
  • [2008-05-26 4:30]

Wonderful colours, just wonderful. I love how there is so many layers, in the ground and the buildings. Excellent detail, I can almost read the for sale sign. Well done.
Warm Regards
Wanda

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2154 W: 379 N: 2143] (23036)
  • [2008-05-26 7:25]

Merhaba Myfriend Teresat.....
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful shot..
Selamlar...
Milas...

:) Wonderful posting, my dear, as always! Miss you...
Diana

Hi my friend!
Wonderful shot and composition!Nice colours.
Greetings.
A.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 848 W: 0 N: 1365] (5544)
  • [2008-05-27 7:20]

Hi Teresat
Another colorful photo of Portugal.
Nicely captured with such vivid colours
Good shot
Dot
Later

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5224 W: 180 N: 6192] (32677)
  • [2008-05-29 5:26]

Ola Teresat

Beautiful your composition
Looking at her, her I think model,
toy houses. Perfect visual!
The house of the right is very detailed
I lose with so many details, windows, colors
it is fantastic!
Beautiful and excellent post!
Congratulations.

Sérgio

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-05-30 1:59]

Interesting shot as usual.
Diffrent view and diffrent buildings.
Looks great.
Compliments.
Janek Kloss

Hi teresat,

Its a funny photo.. I like the composition. Its surprising and invites to search for details on the photo

Ola Teresa
Gosto do teu sentido de humor quando escolhes os titulos.
Temos aqui um caos de grande beleza. Magnificas as cores e os detalhes
Abraço
Aires

Hi Teresat
I like very much your style, unique mixture of art and sensitiveness
Well done
Bye

Hi Teresat !
nice POV, colour and shapes. Well done.
Best regards, Daniel

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  • burak28 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 41 N: 306] (3330)
  • [2008-07-17 3:31]

Good title
Good note
Excellent composition and colors
Thanks for sharing
Burak28

Hello Teresat,
Damların,yani kiremitlerin kırmızılığı çok canlı.Öndeki açık mavi renk ile bakımsız evi ön plana çıkarırken soldaki boyanmış ,sade binalar tam bir kontrast.Molte bene fotografia..
Ataman Ayvaz

Ola teresat,

mais uma das muitas fotografias que adoro da tua galeria.

Os prédios abaixo mais degradados tem tantos detalhes qe não consigo parar de olhar..simplesmente adorei o teu POV.

Tfs,

Abraço
Marco

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2518 W: 48 N: 2993] (14124)
  • [2008-09-06 4:27]

Hello Teresat,
Amanzing city shot,I like the original composition.Excellent sharpnes and fantastic view.
Best regards.
Janusz
**)later

Hello Teresa,
Texture on the red tiled roofs is most attractive. So interesting to see broken window glasses as well as renovated houses. I enjoyed reading your Note, you are such a romanticist and art lover. Regards, Danilo

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