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Rail Track


Rail Track
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Copyright: adastro RomeuToscano (Romeu) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 313 W: 0 N: 185] (1661)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-12
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ30
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-17 5:02
Viewed: 656
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 104
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi TL friends,

This shot was taken in Lisboa, I was waiting for a train to shot… fortunately I felt the enchanting of the rail tracks! The parallel lines going to everywhere and at same time to nothing made me think…

I hope you like,

Romeu

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Hi Romeu,
The graphism depicted is attractive. I like the lines and shapes shown. Best regards, Danilo

Olá Romeu

another surprise. always .

great graphism and very good light and colour. very beautiful shot.
Um beijo

teresat

Very artistic and creative shot Romeu.
I love the texture of the gravel here.
The repetition is enjoyable to see.
Great lines and composition.
Well done.
- Vincent

Good job! The detail is excellent, as are the colors. Train tracks are so fascinating aren't they. TFS and have a good day!

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3059 W: 97 N: 3327] (20653)
  • [2008-06-17 8:48]

Hello Adastro.
Not bad, but much better it can be when you really stay at the middle, so it will be equal on both sides.
Regards from Jan

Hi Adastro,
Beautiful impressive shot...
Great graphism.
Wonderful perspective.
Excellent details.Well done.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Grande Romeu. Excellent taken. To five vertical lines you've realised a masterpiece.

Roberto

Ola Adastro


Eu gosto da foto visto de cima,
eu gosto das formas diferentes de linhas,
de ferro e concreto. um grande grafismo!
Uma bela captura e visual!
Belo tiro my friend...

Sergio

Hi Romeu
swett and simple
and very effective.
good
tfs

Hello Adastro. I like the simplicity of your composition. The tracks captured with leading perspective. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

Hi Adastro,
Very good use of lines and texture to form the structure of this compo. I like the repeating patterns and the overall symmetry. Well captured and composed. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hello Romeu,
Nice artistic photo, I like composition and natural colour of rails, nice capture ...
My Best Regards
Rastislav

Ciao Romeo, splendid graphic, fantastic composition, bravo, very well done, ciao Silvio

Ola Romeu,
Muito bom,gosto da fotografia.
Parabens e abraco,
Ralf

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 912 W: 0 N: 1576] (6907)
  • [2008-06-18 7:21]

Hi Romeu
Its amazing where we find beauty when one has their eyes opened. The symmetry and the patterns with different tones is
a good capture with a pov leading us to the unkown.
Very nice work
Dot

A wonderful study of lines and textures, with good use of light. This kind of subject is fun to experiment with...different angles, different POVs, different distances. I like what you did with this shot, and find it quite appealing. Nice work:)

Great graphic image, Romeu. There is something very photogenic about railroad tracks. I like how the lines are at a slight angle. Good sharpness and tones. Well done.

Nice line abstract Romeu. Well composed.
Cheers,
Dennis

Hi Adastro
Very interesting image,almost lake 3D efect.
Very good sharpnes and details.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2816 W: 363 N: 2725] (11788)
  • [2008-06-19 14:22]
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Romeu, sorry for breaking all the praise here... but for me it doesn't really work the way you present it.

For the shot "as is": you were not standing in the middle between the tracks, so there's no symmetry in the rails, on the right you have a rail near the corner, on the left the "counterpart" in the image starts almost halfway in the shot. Also the footpath on the left is a bit disturbing as it has nothing to balance it on the right.

You want to express "The parallel lines going to everywhere"... but to me it doesn't feel that way. I think taking a vertical shot, and standing in the middle, would work a lot better because then the tracks would carry the eyes a lot further.

Just my opinion, of course.
TFS

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1531 W: 139 N: 2160] (19466)
  • [2008-06-19 14:37]

Very simple composition but very effective! Well done Adastro on this nice shot, well seen and well done!

Mario

Adastro

te felicito gran idea y enfoque bien logrado

Hi Romeu,
Nice perpective and well presented and composed with great sharpness, Excellent POV. and details
Best regard,
My compliments
Michel

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 124 W: 0 N: 67] (1083)
  • [2008-06-19 23:26]

Hi Adastro,

Nice graphical effect of these parallel lines. splendid clarity and sharpness. Well done, tfs.

Regards

Malgorzata

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2084 W: 60 N: 3032] (15815)
  • [2008-06-20 7:25]

Hi Romeu...
Another excellent catch, nicely done..!
Fine image, colors and details...
Best regards,
George

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 608 W: 53 N: 820] (4922)
  • [2008-06-20 9:29]

Ciao Romeu
A great play with a linear theme, the railway tracks. Clear and sharp details and a question that can't really be answered
TFS
Argiris

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 322 W: 2 N: 43] (2857)
  • [2008-06-20 13:24]

Interesting and good shot.
Best regards, Bosko.

Hi, Adastro!

Minimalist but nice. Excellent composition!

TFS,

jazmin

Olá Adastro,
Excelente prespectiva e composição. Grande efeito gráfico. Gostei tanto que não resisti a brincar um pouco com ela; espero que goste do «ws».
: ltr, mb

Olá Romeu
nice composition and idea!
Regards.
A.

Hi Romeu,
Very beautiful graphism vith good sharp and lighting.TFS.
Abracos,

hAyAti

Hi Romeu,
attractive shot and excellent graphism.
Excellent composition.Well done.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

Hi Romeu,
Wonderful symmetrical line and vivid textures to this simple image seen in great clarity.
Regards, Tom

Hello Romeu,
Highly impressive graphism.
Creative idea and realisation...
Congratulations.
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 48 N: 2973] (14442)
  • [2008-06-23 14:23]

Hello Romeu,
Picture with class detail. Beautiful structure with wonderful colors and beautiful perspective.
Greetings.
Janusz

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  • Noslo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 82 N: 118] (916)
  • [2008-06-23 21:27]

Good job Romeu! Very interesting photo.

Lars

Una cosa tan trivial con los carriles embellecidos por tu cámara... a manera de obra de arte.
Muy bueno!!!
Enhorabuena!

Hi Romeu..this is a nicely composed shot...simple and artistic..great sharpness and details.

Roger

Nice lines.... for the train line.

the rail track in that place is so clean unlike here :D nice finding Romeu.. sure look like abstract.. well seen and taken.. good job.

regards, terry
pl :D

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 0 N: 389] (1743)
  • [2008-06-28 17:27]

Hello Adastro,
a very simple shot but actually very interesting and exciting. Lines, textures and light is the big element to be noted here. the clarity and crisp image is the next great criteria of this shot.

regards,
Foozi

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  • aofl Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 3 N: 17] (541)
  • [2008-07-01 12:23]

Oá Romeu
Interssante esta imagem. Na verdade as coisas mais simples são por vezes as que melhor resultam!
Cumprimentos
al

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3674 W: 218 N: 3874] (29464)
  • [2008-07-03 3:26]

Ola adastro

Good repetition of the verticals, with superb sharpness & graphism. Parabens e obrigado!

Belas paralelas, Romeu,
Grande tomada, com ângulo e profundidade extraordinários.
Parabéns,
Raimundo

Hi Romeu,
Nice shot..great shape and line here..
This picture has a good sharpness and detail..
I do like your style here..every photographer had their own style..I salute you my friend..

CM

Thanks for your kind words on "F/T 3 in 1".

hi dear romeu
i like the position of this shot
well done
tfs
joopiter

nice the graphic effect.. lines and impressive details.. well done
ciao Marco

Hi Romeu
wonderful work nice details and good result
Have good day

later
Lucio

Olá Romeu,

muito original essa foto, gostei muito da ideia.
a nitidez está muito boa.

Parabéns,

Abraço.

Marco

Me gustan las fotos de vias y trenes! esta es muy buena!. Felicitaciones!.

Saludos,

Mauro

Good job my friend
Good perspective
Best wishes
Burak28

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1507 W: 5 N: 1612] (9066)
  • [2008-07-25 8:32]

Hello Romeu,
The organization is outstanding here, perfect details and a wonderful effect of the picture. Excellent one sharp details , pleasant colors, very good light and clarity. I like the repetition of your picture,
Greetings.
Eva
**)pt

Again, a graphic composition with harmoniously repetitive elements. Well done, Adastro!
Best regards,
Diana

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