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wheels of labour
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Copyright: jose mbrito (mbrito) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1244 W: 65 N: 1704] (7027)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007
Categories: Mood
Camera: Sony DSLR Alpha-100, Sony 75-300mm f/4.5-5.6 Telephoto Zoom
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Red World, Wheels of old carriages [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-13 15:34
Viewed: 641
Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 146
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
«so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens».

The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams

William Carlos Williams (17 September 1883 – 4 March 1963), was an American poet closely associated with «modernism« and «imagism».

William studied medicine at the University of Pennsylvania, where he became friends with Ezra Pound. At the same time that began his paediatric practice in his hometown, William writes and publishes plays, poems, novels, and essays.

William was heavily influenced by Pound, who helped him get a collection of poems, «The Tempers», published in 1913.

William was a major poet of the «imagist» movement but later abandoned the movement. He was also influenced by «dadaism» and «cubism». He was a major writer in the modernist movement, helping to create a clear American voice.

Williams had a heart attack in 1948 which was followed by a series of strokes, forcing him to retire from his medical practice. He continued to write until his death on March 4th, 1963.

William Carlos Williams was a highly acclaimed writer, two of his many honours include the National Book Award in 1950 and the Pulitzer Prize in 1963.

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1277 W: 18 N: 629] (11621)
  • [2008-07-13 15:38]

Very beautiful and vibrant color!! I love these old wagon wheels. Very nicely framed. TFS and have a great week!

Hello Jose,

Very nice composition,
fine colors and light!

Malik & Mary.

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 295 W: 0 N: 153] (1421)
  • [2008-07-13 15:47]
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Olá José,

esta imagem está fantástica! Adorei a cor da roda. A composiçao est+a perfeita!

Un abraço,
Romeu

What a beauty- and what great text accompany's it---beautiful, vibrant colours-really well handled---Lynne

godd morning my friend jose
wonderful artistic picture and composition.wonderful idea and colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Jose,
A wonderful picture vith excellent colours and graphism.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Hi Jose,

Good document.
I like the tonal beauty.
Fine work.

jp

bom dia jose

Beautiful composition, Fantastic mood.Great light and colours.Great title, fine note.

my regards

teresat

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 416 W: 0 N: 518] (5482)
  • [2008-07-14 1:15]

Hello,

Mangigique cette vielle roue, sa couleur est superbe, très beau détail.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hi Jose
buenas dia
una composition muy bonita por el efecto de la rueda roja.
bonito los particulares y pov
ciao
una buena semana
Lucio

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3446 W: 100 N: 3062] (19668)
  • [2008-07-14 2:59]

Ola Jose.
Nice 'classic' Still life picture.
Composition and colours are outstanding.
tfs.
Best regards from jan

What a wonderful capture
Good colors
Good perspective and colors
Thanks for sharing
Burak28

Wonderful composition, Jose, great colors and excellent array of textures! Today is Monday and I see you posted this picture yesterday, but, for me it does a great deal seeing it today! The week has been set in motion today, so your shot couldn't be more appropriate for the week's start!
Have a wonderful week,
Diana
p.s. Thank you! :)

Olá MB
Stunning and striking capture and note.
Wonderful red wheel...
Obrigado
Um abraço
JD

Merhaba jose,cok hos bir detay calismasi olmus.Kirmizinin goz aliciligi karede etkili olmus.
Nostaljik bir fotograf,tebrikler :))

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2167 W: 385 N: 2285] (24750)
  • [2008-07-14 9:31]

Merhaba Myfriend dear Jose....
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful shot....
Selamlar...
Milas...

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 631 W: 53 N: 747] (4604)
  • [2008-07-14 9:57]

Hi Jose
An excellent combination, again of a strong capture with the bright reds and the verse by Williams.
My compliments
Argiris

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 692 W: 38 N: 750] (6668)
  • [2008-07-14 11:05]

ciao jose...bellissimo lavoro...ottimo soggetto...belli i colori e bellissima la nota...bello il pov...complimenti
lele

Hello Jose,
Excellent composition in this beautiful capture.
Very beautiful contrast and colours..Well done my friend.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan

Hi Jose,
Simple but very creative shot of a wheel...
Sharpnes shiny red colour...
Good lightining.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • Maged Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 72 W: 3 N: 85] (953)
  • [2008-07-14 12:11]

Hello Dear jose
It's very pretty shot , colors, contrast , framed all are perfect , i did try to shot old wagon wheels but it wasn't that good what you did here.

Well Done
Best Regards
Maged

Ciao Josè, amico mio. Nearly becoming embarrassing to comment yours photo. These two old and simple broken off wheels have an impact outside from the normal school for who watch to them. Fabulous colors.

Roberto

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 1024 W: 57 N: 31] (5685)
  • [2008-07-14 12:30]

Bonjour,
Bel composition bien équilibrée.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

Good colour Jose and lovely textures in all the elements of the image. Well composed and a lovely mix of geometric shapes.
David

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  • Doudou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 291 W: 0 N: 540] (3941)
  • [2008-07-14 13:08]

Bonsoir Jose,

Bonne composition de ces roues aux couleurs vives créant un contraste avec le mur gris!
Amicalement
Odile

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 325 W: 2 N: 43] (2855)
  • [2008-07-14 13:43]

Beautiful composition and nice colour.
Best regards, Bosko.

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  • tatara Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 33 N: 111] (2169)
  • [2008-07-14 16:27]

Jose,this is great picture,fantastic colours and composition.
My best regards and congr..
Jozef..

Hi Jose..great composition..nice colors and details.

Roger

Hello Jose
very nice work my friend!I like it.Nice shot.
Regards.
A.

Hi Jose,
just an excellent compo with beautiful rich colours,
superb clarity and sharpnes,
and i really love to read your notes;)
welldone my desr friend and tfs,
regards,
Taner
:) tomorrow

Hello Jose,
Great composition and highly saturated vivid colors.
Wonderful shot...
TFS
Selahattin E

Ola Jose,

Bonito e interessante visual!
A tua composição foi excelente para citar este poeta.
Eu gosto das cores fortes e vibrantes desta roda
o vermelho contrasta bem em meio ao verde e cinza.
Bem detalhada e muito bem composta.
Parabens, excelente shot!

Sergio

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 175 W: 0 N: 128] (1369)
  • [2008-07-15 7:29]

Hi Jose,
A fine composition indeed..very peotic.
Regards,
Subashini

Hello Jose,
An elegant composition. The red wheel is so well put in the frame. Vivid colors and with good colors and contrast. Greetings! Danilo

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3713 W: 216 N: 3721] (28231)
  • [2008-07-15 7:50]

Hi jose

Fantastic symmetry and graphism of the two red wagon wheels, with good sharpness and framing. Tfs!

Great catch my friend. This vibrant red wheel,
is a great symbol and how you have presented it is very effective.
Expert color and tone.
Really nice work José!
- Vincent

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1568 W: 118 N: 2592] (10026)
  • [2008-07-15 10:27]

hello Jose

Very good abstract capture of the red wheels set against the background walls and making it a sharp subject. Well composed shot.

tfs, bill

Good title, great note and superb photo.
Maybe a tiny bit too much saturation, but I like the content.
TFS.
greetings,
Joop!

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2879 W: 368 N: 2718] (11723)
  • [2008-07-15 11:39]

A nice compo, José, and very deeply saturated colours. The rust on the iron band around the wheel is well captured too, a nice detail in the photo.
TFS

bom dia josè,
nice contrapposition to the last posting: working wheels instead of amusement wheels
this time we are reminded of hard work and cultivation of often ungrateful land, land that requires constant tending to, land that rewards us with fruits of labour and the conscience of hard earned rest
the red sings of the triumph of life over all hardships and the central position celebrates the centralò role of work in our lives. bravissimo
love
anna

hello Jose,

the wheel is really eye-catching with the bright red colour.. a lovely composition and detail.. simple and yet wonderful presentation to us.. lovely note.. good work.

regards, terry

Hi Jose,

Simple object, but nicely presented . .
This thing has been used for something needed at the time . .
Well composed

Tfs,
TJutjut

Hello Jose,

I like the colour palette as the red and rusty wheel contrasts so well with the surroundings!
Skillful composition, with good division of the frame and effective placement of main subject...

Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Jose,
I like taking photos of old things ... they offer so much history which makes them an item of interest. Wonderfully captured scene and well composed. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1549 W: 143 N: 2154] (19358)
  • [2008-07-16 8:34]

Hello Jose, well composed scene with some beautiful colors and textures, well done!

Mario

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2489 W: 48 N: 3013] (14304)
  • [2008-07-16 10:23]

I like the beautiful colours these old wagon wheels,excellent details and presentation Jose.Very good note.Excellent job.
Well done.
Janusz

Hi Jose, splendid composition with fantastic colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2936 W: 618 N: 3365] (15449)
  • [2008-07-16 12:17]

Hi Jose,
If I was a painter, I would like to make this kind of painting!
The contrast of the deep red of the wheel against the grey wall and greeneries pops out the image!
Very beautifully done with a good artistic sense!
Annie

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2094 W: 59 N: 2676] (14733)
  • [2008-07-17 3:58]

Hi Jose...
Another excellent catch, nicely done..!
Fine image, colors and details...
Best regards,
George

Hi, Jose!

Interesting and special theme, excellent realisation.
I like it!

jazmin

Hi Jose,
I like the graphical impression in this composition. Shapes, form and lines are making it looks interesting. The vivid colors and great clarity are enhancing the beauty.

Regards,
Ramdan.
:) :)

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  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 195 W: 9 N: 286] (1078)
  • [2008-07-17 8:08]

O conjunto está fantástico, Fotografia, titulo e notas.
Cores excelentes, boa luminosidade e composição fantástica.

Parabéns José.

Hi dear friend,
amazing contrast between that wonderful red and the rest of the shot.
Perfect title for it. Really nicely seen!
Best wishes,
Ioana
:) soon

Ciao Jose,
good colours in this shot.
I like the composition and the poem...

Silvia

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  • budgun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 361 W: 2 N: 374] (2021)
  • [2008-07-19 20:10]

Hi Jose,
Lovely clear colors and fantastic details to this wonderfully simple composition. Very intersting informative note to go with the beautiful poem.
Regards, Tom

Dear Jose,
A wonderful picture with excellent colors and graphism.
Details are so perfect
Regards,

Hello Jose. Excellent framing of this well seen subject. The work and the contrast is stunning with good contrast and saturation. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

Hello Jose,
Very nice photo here with beautiful colour of red, good composition really nice effect...
My Best Regards
Rastislav

Very beautiful picture with great composition and vivid colors...Very meaningful and very atmospheric picture !!I like it :)
warm regards
biljana

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 362 W: 2 N: 87] (3420)
  • [2008-07-22 14:19]

Hi Jose, fine composition and graphic effect, strong contrast of colours. I like the bg too.
well done!
Ciao, cinzia

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 974 W: 46 N: 899] (6172)
  • [2008-07-23 14:12]

Photographer's motto: whenever you see red, shoot it:) This is an eye-catching and interesting image, showing the red wheels still strong in color but worn out in use. The surroundings seem to finish their story, yet give them a place to rest. Well seen and captured!

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  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 98 W: 2 N: 40] (1131)
  • [2008-07-24 3:16]

PERFECT Jose !
Perfect colors and color contrast
Perfec framed
Excellent note and title
In a few words SUPERB
best regards from a very hot Greece
Argyris

I can see why this got so many points. I love the stand-out red! I clicked on your gallery and my eye went straight to this photo.
Tracy

Hello Jose,

I haven't had much time to see everyone's gallery recently and have wanted to come back to this photograph of yours that I saw the day you posted it. The compostition is fabulous/line and curve. The color combination is so well balanced with red and green and a neutral background of gray and brown. Well done.
The Poem you selected is one of the most common poems used to teach poetry appreciation (in the US), because it illustrates vivid color and subtle tranquility...as does your photograph.

Kind regards,
Jim

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1156 W: 62 N: 809] (12641)
  • [2008-07-26 3:59]

Hi Jose,
beautiful creative composition.Colours are so strong and beautiful.Great work.Congratulations my friend.Necla.

Hi Jose!
Amazing red wheel. Wonderful background. Good capture. Original picture.
Cheers!

Dear Jose,
Great photo! Basit fakat etkili bir fotoğraf.Araba tekerleğinin kırmızısı cember içinde geçmişi güzel ifade ediyor.
Composition very nice..
Best Regards
Ataman Ayvaz

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 355 W: 44 N: 471] (1745)
  • [2008-07-30 14:13]

Nicely composed abstract photo. Good color and lighting. Well done.
Very interesting story and note as well.
TFS,
Wilt

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1507 W: 5 N: 1612] (9066)
  • [2008-08-10 13:00]

Hi Jose,
Wonderful collected moment with good sharpness. Wonderfully composition.
Regards.
Eva

Hello Jose,
great simplicity, colors and subject.
Regards Caesar

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1906 W: 76 N: 0] (18995)
  • [2008-08-22 7:10]

Hola Jose ;)
simple beautiful...TFS
Best,
J ;)

Hello Jose, Love the vibrant red colour of the wheel. It contrasts well with the textures behind and green of the grass. Stunning!
Pat.

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1314 W: 53 N: 1371] (6796)
  • [2008-10-24 16:25]

Hello Jose
Wonderfuls still life set off by the red wheel on the gray background. Sharp and clear image well composed.

Dan

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