Pintarroxo

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• Mitch (148)
• [2008-10-10 17:58]

Nice colours, and good focus on the main subject.

If i could suggest a re-work though? I think a closer crop on the robin to reduce the background blur would make a better picture.

The bird's very well focused so you could crop in really close losing the background, but keeping the leaves in the foreground.

Still, a very nice shot of the little fellah, reminding us all of the winter to come.

Regards

Martin

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• techranger (486)
• [2008-10-10 18:37]
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I took the liberty of doing a workshop on your fine, nicely lit image.

I agree with Martin on the closer cropping and I also increased the gamma exposure a bit, and did a little adjusting to the highlights, contrast, saturation, and sharping. Also placed the bird in the lower right third of the photo so it is looking into the photo. Added a frame also. The purpose of all this is to enhance the subject and eliminate some of the background distraction.

Hope you like it and hope this is helpful. :)

Larry

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• juyona (13632)
• [2008-10-11 12:27]

Hola Isa,
siempre es un placer tener delante de la lente estos bellos pajaritos,
son muy amigables y con unos trozitos de pan pueden venir muy cerca de ti.
bella escena donde dete peti, parece estar soñando.
creo que el workshop es bueno.
saludos amiga

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• Fortuna (14531)
• [2008-10-12 3:33]

Boa tarde minha amiga Isa,

Um solitário, frágil e lindo pássaro, como que perdido em meio a tanto verde!
Ótima composição onde fica muito bem o fundo desfocado e cujas cores estão, além de belas, bem naturais.
Parabéns e AFS,
Sergio

(*) "A ave constrói o ninho; a aranha, a teia; o homem, a amizade."

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• RodiNet (239)
• [2008-10-13 11:25]

Fantástica a foto do papinho :o

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• brunorsantana (1113)
• [2008-10-14 9:32]

Olha o lindo e pequeno pintarroxo aqui outra vez!! Gostei muito da nitidez do assunto principal, amiga Isa... belo foco!
Acho que a única coisa que poderia ser diferente, é o enquadramento do passarinho. Acredito que se ele estivesse um pouquinho mais afastado do centro, talvez ganhasse mais destaque.
Parabéns pela bela imagem, minha amiga!!!

Saudações brasileiras,
Bruno

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• eyesthetix (7883)
• [2008-10-17 2:25]

Hi Isabel,
attractive image. Perhaps a closer selective focus on the bird (ie with a narrow DoF) may have worked even better.

Best regards Daniel

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• Alice_40 (2956)
• [2008-11-15 2:02]

Great shot
Congratulate

alina