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Copyright: Teresat Teresat (Teresat) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1921 W: 62 N: 2786] (11015)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-12
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Mood
Camera: Panasonic FZ18
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-02-09 9:20
Viewed: 661
Points: 100
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo has been taken at the end of a day (5 pm), in a december month, at Lisbon.
There is a sadness in these streets in this time of the day. They become so empty... of people and... light.

Sometimes is hard to live between...

T.

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Ola Teresat,

Again and again, I must mention here that your capture have something always very interesting and touchy,and this one is no exception!

I feel a mystic look of this place, captured with perfect sharpness and from a higher POV. The serpentine road with tram-tracks and buildings, give a fabulous look as B/W version of the picture. Very well seen!

best regards,
Paras

Boa tarde Teresa,
Eu vou concordar com Paras quando ele diz que suas fotos tem sempre algo de tocante e um certo ar místico. Decerto essas vias elas não são assim, mas você as vê assim e isso é o que é importante.
Excelente profundidade.
Parabéns, amiga.
Raimundo

Beautiful Teresa!! Your shots always portray so much emotion .. and mood. This one is no exception .. I do feel the sadness and loneliness, as the streets become empty of light and people.
Great colors, as always Teresa. Your shots are so recognizable.
Trudy

Hello Teresat,

This photograph is exceptional!! I love the black and white. You have alot of emotion in this photo. Great tones and shadows!

Well done!

Christian

Hi Teresat,
Curve of the road is very pretty..
Depth and perspective are excellent.
Good details...Well done my friend..Tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hello Teresa,

Always happy to see the dramatic angles and steep streets of Portugal's capital city. The steep streets must have been built around the fabled seven hills which surround Lisbon. I love the lines from the bottom to the top. Your perspective and scale are right on target, and the b&w rendition makes it very wholesome and aged. As a matter of fact, this posting reminds me of one of the many photos from the "The Soul of Lisbon," January/February 2002, National Geographic Traveler magazine). I wish you well my dear. A very good work and posting. Cheers

Danilo

Hello Teresat,

I really like this image.
The tones and the tram lines catch our attention initially so we click on the image, then the light conveys the bleakness of this particular area at this time of year (and day?), enhanced by the stripping away of any colour.

Obrigado

[the only Portuguese words I know are... cerveza, por favor ... obrigado... I'm obviously from England :) ]

Olá Teresat,

Extremely good photography full of emotions, actually like all your photos.
I like your choice for black and white.
Excellent composition, POV and sharpness.
The light tones are fantastic.

Best regards,
Tatjana

Hello Teresat,
Perfectly done artistic shot. Great perspective and light..
As usual... a masterpiece from you
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3309 W: 873 N: 4721] (21272)
  • [2010-02-09 12:35]

Hi Teresa,
Another beautiful photo. You not only depicted the sadness of this grey and empty street, but you show its poignant realism. I like how you put the rails in the composition. Seems endless. Superb POV and converting to B & W. Be proud of you, dear friend! Annie

Loved the tones, composition and the mood of the photo. Very cinematic. Well taken.

Olá Teresa!

Eu não gosto de pensar que você fica triste. Desejo felicidade para você.

Eu amo a fotografia. A sua nota vai muito bem com ele. Eu gosto da vinheta e da vista da cidade da rua.

São os dias a ficar mais tempo agora, ou mais curto? Os dias estão ficando mais tempo agora.

A cidade onde eu moro usar para ser chamado de "Nap Town", porque tudo fechado em baixa de 5. A cidade tem crescido agora, e já não vai por esse nome.

Espero que o sol brilha mais em seu rosto para trazer felicidade e um sorriso!

um grande abraço para você!
Dennis

Hi Teresa!

Really beautiful work! I like it! And of course you have created perfect light accents!
You have really good eyes and amazing understanding of the composition!
Nice to be together in the TL list!

Warm regards,
Edward

Hi Teresat...beautiful mood...nice tones...well done as usual...

Roger

hi Teresat, your note fits the shot and that means you accomplished your photographic goal, well done :)

I suggest you an idea: why don´t you take this same photo from the same POV at a different hour, when it is busy and full of people, in colours? Then share it here with all of us...

Boa noite,

Galder

Hello teresat ,

I love the vignetting emphasizing the visibility of the tramway tracks. The pedestrians were also a must to create the atmosphere and give them room to move ahead .
Smart work,
Robert

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3606 W: 843 N: 2571] (20257)
  • [2010-02-09 23:18]

That's a gorgeous slice of grey daily life
I love the endless rails of our daily struggle ... great !
The tones are superb, as always


thanks,
v

Hello, Teresa -
Excellent composition - the street with its street car tracks leads the eye at a gentle angle from the bottom left to the top right of the frame. Yes, the mood is subdued, and that is enhanced by the b&w presentation and the vignette which provides a wistful feel. I like the repeating patterns of the row houses and cars. Your photos convey such emotion. Well done.

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 921 W: 0 N: 1899] (8561)
  • [2010-02-10 3:28]

Hola Teresat,
ainda uma imagem de topo.
Excelente idéia para jogar sua imagem em B & W.
Assunto foto vem mais óbvia.
Excelelent e PDV's.
Saudações amigáveis,
Adrian

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6127 W: 187 N: 3555] (14836)
  • [2010-02-10 3:48]

Ciao Teresat


Belíssimo efeito desta rua com este mood.
eu gosto dos efeitso das linhas dos bondes
na rua, é uma grande ladeira, e um belo B&W
Uma fotografia bastante interessante e
verdadeiramente belo.
Excelente captura e composição.
Perspectiva muito bem e bonita apresentação.
Tenha um bom dia!

Sergio

Hello Teresat,
You presented a perfect shot fully supporting your note,the creative way of PP work made it more sad,every one sees the things differently but here I really see that a sad atmosphere specially with empty roads and chill weather are all elements which support your composition,B&W mood works well,good contrast tonal effect,well captured with beautiful POV and nice DOF,well done.
TFS,
Best Regards,
Mushtaq Hussain

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3989 W: 429 N: 7657] (45808)
  • [2010-02-10 6:53]

Ola Teresat

I love the perspective & lead in lines, here. Good sharpness, & a dramatic tonal range. The people animate the scene & provide scale. Parabens!

WOW Teresa! LOVE IT! Gritty, dramatic, love the road as it sways from front to back! LOVE the processing, BW is the only way to go here. Love all the textures and lines! One of your best my friend!
B-)
Linda

Personalísimo momento cotidiano con un efecto gráfico muy interesante: las curvas de los raíles...y la gran profundidad...saludos

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1776 W: 0 N: 3609] (28987)
  • [2010-02-11 4:33]

Hello,
Merveilleus eiamge ces lignes de tram font un grandisoe graphisme avec les personnages en noir, elle partent et filent dans le mystère et l'ombre, fantastique.

Bravo et maitié

Nicou

Hi Teresat,
Very nice caught of view in black & white with a beautiful contrast and light,
Excellent POV. and lovely details,
Nice tone and great perpective,
very well done.
all my compliments
Michel

You portray Lisbon so well Teresa , your angle of view here is engaging my eyes to run along the length of the street , focusing on that bend there where some people stand about , oh Lisbon is so delightfully endowed with those little corners typical to old towns, this time is less people about thus it means more in that the sensation of solitude is heightened , the black and white renders this moody atmosphere with intensity ,well in fact it is no wonder why you shoot so often in this medium as it is the perfect means of transmitting your emotions in what you photograph , i live Lisbon through your eyes my friend,
Thank you ,
Um abraço ,
Carol

Hello Teresat,
I like this one. The strong contrast made it very moody.
best wishes,
Achim

Hola Teresat
Buena escena urbana con un buen encuadre y profundidad de esta calle con las vias del tranvia tan famoso en este ciudad , buen virado en blanco y negro y excelente luz , felicidades
Buen trabajo
un saludo
Carlos

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2012 W: 305 N: 3094] (26852)
  • [2010-02-12 7:43]

Hello Teresat! You really have the eye! I love your style, great point of view and a well composed scene. Well done, thanks!

Mario

Hi Teresa

I think your post treatment of this one is good, and it works well to draw the eye up into the frame.

I wonder if the crop could be better, maybe if you took more off the left and right sides of the shot to make it narrower, tighter, using more of the lead-in from the bottom left corner?

It also feels to me like it needs to be rotated very slightly clockwise, maybe only 1˚, to make the trees and verticals on the right hand side more upright.

Your photo is a little over-sharpened in places. See the bollards - and even the people - on the sidewalk to the left of the shot? They have white edges beside them - "ghost" lines - that result from the sharpening process.

Still, it's an eyecatching and evocative image. :)

Thank you for sharing!
Rew

Bonjour Teresat.
Un contraste fort accentué par un bon travail de traitement d’image.
Le vignetage donne un bon aspect à cette image.
Superbe photo noir et blanc.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Ola Teresat! Amazing POV and capture. Very good composition. Perfect exposure. Sophisticated shot. Great effect. Saude!

Hi Teresa,
A wonderful daily life scene with superb B&W composition.Great perspective.TFS.
Abraço,

hAyAti

Hello Teresat

Mysterious and artistic mood like in a good film.
Perfect b&w contrast
Strong and clever use of light
ArT is here.
WoNdErFuL work Teresat

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1421 W: 73 N: 80] (17928)
  • [2010-02-14 20:22]

dear Teresa,
this curve of rails on the slope makes deeply still feeling in "the end of a day",
surrounding darkness also makes depressive and fatigue sensation in "the end of a day" too,
but I like this melancholic ambience and ennui atmosphere, maybe it is basic mood there and here,
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

Bonjour Teresat

Superbe réalisation en N&B. Un beau contraste et des courbes. Une ambiance qui peut susciter beaucoup d'émotion contrastée comme cette image.
Amicalement
Valérie

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 607 W: 19 N: 772] (4341)
  • [2010-02-15 4:47]

Ola Teresat!
What a suggestive picture!!
Superb POV....the serpentine road is fantastic! and sharpness. Splendid lighting and great details.
Perfect choice of B/W.
Ciao! Vanda

Hello Teresa,
I recognize here the mood of Lisbon. The steep streets, the light on the tram rails,... I like the light you manage in this picture and your choice of the B/W who increases the emptyness. Happy are you, no snow and no icy wind ! A weather to go in an Alfama's bar to hear a fado !
Kind regards
Jean

Ciao Teresa, fascinating urban view by great POV, splendid B&W, very well done, ciao Silvio

Teresa,

A enfase nos trilhos, com o que resta da luz centrada no cruzamento (torto) deixam a elevação da rua um tanto mais acentuada.

Excelente POV alto. Voce e suas janelas e telhados.

Parabéns pela captura da alma do momento.

Lisboa agradece

Wellington

Ola Teresat!
What an amazing and artistic compo!
Fine lighting,shadows and contrast!
effective silhouettes and curved road!
Great perspective and depth!A wonderful
moody image!A masterpiece from you as
always,thanks!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1124 W: 0 N: 2671] (13698)
  • [2010-02-19 8:40]

Hello Teresat :)

Splendid formulation, street looks very curiously.
Excellent composition and her effect as well as light.
It pleases me, I congratulate realization.

With best wishes.
Barbara

Hello Teresat,
I think this is a Tremendous image, POV, DOF etc.
and the Range of Tones make it a very Dramatic image.
Very Impressed.
Regards.
MikeD

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 300 W: 42 N: 830] (4064)
  • [2010-02-22 8:36]

Hi Teresat,

A dramatic daily life shot, nice perspective and leading lines.
The black & white works well with the composition. Beautiful one!

TFS...Ramon

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  • brubar Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 276 W: 52 N: 9] (1815)
  • [2010-02-24 23:11]

Ciao Teresa,

it is true, your image transmits a sadness sense, but it transmits also love for your city.

TFS
Saluti dall'Italia
bruno

Hello Teresa,
Nice perspective in BW tone with a lot of emotion.
The empty street, walking/standing men, the row of building on the left, and trees on the right really work well to produce a strong photo.
Best wishes,
Yopie

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2010-02-26 15:25]

Hello Teresat
I would not change a thing in this shot, it conveys the early days of winter when the sun retires early and the people retire early.
Those tracks are a great lead in.Super nice job.
Dot

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2047 W: 144 N: 1884] (24623)
  • [2010-03-07 22:12]

Hi Teresat,
beautiful W&B work and atmosphere.Well taken.Well composed.TFS.Necla.

Esta foto ratifica a grande artista que você é, Teresa.
Grande olhar e um "pp work" de muito bom gosto.
Nâo tenho mais o que falar... se me permite, prefiro admirar...

Forte abraço, minha querida!
Bruno Santana

Onde estavas pendurada Teresa? Já aqui foi tudo escrito sobre o que torna a foto tão boa. A minha dúvida é onde estavas.

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1480 W: 275 N: 2127] (13158)
  • [2010-04-26 23:46]

Hello Teresa.
Good street story presented here. Very good details and interesting point of view.
Nice day in December.
Regards.
Janek Kloss

Olá Teresat,
Lindo trabalho, excelente composição e escolha do tema. Perfeito. Excelente senso de profundidade muito bem guiado pelas linhas do trem nesta viela.

Obrigado por compartilhar,

Flávio.

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 260 W: 57 N: 371] (5665)
  • [2010-07-23 23:03]
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Hi,
You quote There is a sadness in these streets in this time of the day. They become so empty... of people and... light. that's quite right and wrong side people moving, TFS.
Regards.

Musa.

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