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• Redrubin (10735)
• [2008-07-31 3:13]

Hi Ianua
I see and not look a well done work
cropping is good and bw perfect
I like the light in the eye
good work
have nice day
ciao
Lucio

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• datis (603)
• [2008-07-31 3:16]

Hi Ianua,

This is excellent and so nice moody portrait, Clear focus on eye.

Regards,
Daryoosh

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• hyakuhei (23)
• [2008-07-31 3:20]
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I think this is a beautiful image, the crop is lovely I think the hair is a little too shiney and I don't like the way it seperates over her forehead, it creates a diagnonal line that I think distracts from the main focus. Great image though :-D inspiring.

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• Maged (953)
• [2008-07-31 3:21]

Hello Ianua
Beautiful portrait and beautiful eyes.
Well Done
Maged

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• Reflex (1508)
• [2008-07-31 3:45]

The balance of the light is particularly well done ! Good composition !
Jean

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• Arindam_1984 (241)
• [2008-07-31 4:06]

gr8 friend...
spcially the eyes..
amazing..
good work my friend..
Regards
Arindam

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• johnbuttress (276)
• [2008-07-31 5:12]
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Hi Ianua

I think this is a really good, unusual portrait.

The eye is very central in the frame, which I think some people might criticise. Personally I think it's fine. For me, the bright light on the sleeve (bottom left hand corner) is a bit distracting - I find that it keeps pulling my attention away from the main subject.

Nice portrait though, with lots of imagination and creativity.

Cheers.
John

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• Teresat (5022)
• [2008-07-31 6:16]

Boa tarde

it´s a very creative portrait. A 60´look. Thanks.

MY REGARDS

Teresat

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• misslw (550)
• [2008-07-31 14:10]

A really nice portrait - good lighting - perfect in b&w. I like that we can see the corner of your other eye - but not as part of the main focus. Nice work!

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• mbrito (7027)
• [2008-08-01 2:41]
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Hello Ianua,
Fantastic portrait, superb composition and a wonderful b/work. The light in the eye and in the arm gives it a very poetic atmosphere; it reminds the great european cinema of the 60's (masters like Truffaut, Godard, Antonioni, Visconti, De Sica, Fellini, and so on). Simply superb.
Congrats, mb

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• mariajosecon (1234)
• [2008-08-02 5:47]

Ianua:
I think your portrait is very good, and I also like the crop. Perhaps her sleeve is a bit OE, which competes a bit with the light of the eyebrow.
Really beautiful work, congratulations
María José

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• sebak (421)
• [2008-08-09 16:08]

Hey!

nice picture! i like the sharpness! just great! all the best from germany ;)

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• Nesa (231)
• [2008-09-08 15:12]
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Nice shot, bit over exposed in left angle, I tried some WS - nothing bombastic as your shot is nice, just moderate adj.
All the best.
Nenad.
Hope to see more from you.