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Copyright: Ioana Axy (dusklilly) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 44 W: 15 N: 2] (365)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-19
Categories: Nature, Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-05-11 6:24
Viewed: 485
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a picture I took from my school window in the morning. The light was just absorbing, and so clear...it woke me up instantly!
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To RookiE_1: Thanxdusklilly 1 05-11 07:20
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Nice colours and details...maybe you could have cropped the photo at the bottom and top... but well done...
Welcome to TL!!!!
Erim :D

I also did a workshop... hope don't mind.

Hi Ioana,
its a great picture regarding the light mood.
Anyway i would some small changes
+ Crop the roof form left edge above
+ Remove the date from the picture
regards
Karl

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3557 W: 737 N: 2396] (19036)
  • [2006-05-12 4:12]

Deja lipsurile ti-au fost aratate de ceilalti critici asa ca io nu-ti mai spun decat bun venit pe TL si te sfatuiesc sa incerci sa scrii cat mai multe critici pentru a fi "vazuta" de cat mai multa lume.


o zi frumoasa,
v
ps.Din pacate nu mai am puncte pentru azi

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