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The Story
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Copyright: Bianca Sima (PaperShoes) (78)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-12-15
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/200 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-01 8:33
Viewed: 310
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 24
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Everyone has their story close to their hearts. :)
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  • chendis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 513 W: 193 N: 665] (4862)
  • [2009-07-01 8:36]

Buna Bianca
vii in forta cu inca un portret grozav
filtru excelent da o atmosfera moody jocul de lumini e excelent iar blur ii da o nota misterioasa!

Felicitari si tine-o tot asa!

Oana

I like this! It is seductive, within the TOS of the site! The BW image is NICE, with the old style processing this is moody. It lets the viewer decide how they feel! Good job Bianca!
B-)
Linda

très beau portrait plein de poésie,

bravo Bianca

cordialement

dd, ile de la Réunion

ciao Bianca..
it's cool.. and i like it a lot!.. interesting atmosfere indeed.. nice treatment of the shot and good the use of b&w.. final result is really moody!
subject and pose are interesting and original.. cool also the effect of light and shadows.. i think light is really perfect here! my compliments
it looks like there was a story to tell.. and your model is truly sublime in her wonderful beauty..
excellent capture! thanks
ciao Marco

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  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 37 N: 206] (2812)
  • [2009-07-01 9:44]

Hi Bianca, welcome! I think you used very well the lights and shadows. The model is in a good posture. Really interesting, Adele
Salut, Adele

I love the whole idea of this photo... the B&W and the seductive effect.
TFS!

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 0 N: 353] (1928)
  • [2009-07-01 15:37]

Hi Bianca,
I really like the way you have distressed this image in a way that makes it look old and used, the whole image is fantastic. TFS
Bri

Creative, inventive, with good use of post-work and great use of lighting and prop.

I like it!
Rew

Hello Bianca
Very artistic portrait with nice theme. Excellent composition, the focal point is very well placing, good DOF, shapness and details
good b/w job
Mario

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2205 W: 171 N: 0] (28320)
  • [2009-07-01 23:27]

Good morning ;)
Wonderful B&W story...original...
Have a lovely sunny day...
J ;)

hello Bianca
fine photo,something good is worked out but wants also more effort
regards
Nasos

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3533 W: 725 N: 2377] (18877)
  • [2009-07-02 3:00]

Superba poveste !


felicitari,
v

Hi Bianca,
That a pretty good start. Already we can feel some deep artistic sense here. So I'm not going to talk about exposure, tones and contrast. The thought behind that shot goes beyond that. Actually, it's a representation of a thought, the picture let you think.
Exceptionnal mood, and very well executed.
Hope to see many more of you. Welcome

fantastic
great soft light
very moody indeed
many TFS it
ili :o)

Ciao Bianca, gran bel ritratto, ottimo bianco e nero pieno di fascino, splendida luce e magnifico lavoro in PP, brava, ciao Silvio
PS continuo ad essere curioso:)

Hi ! Binaca ,
I was see all your's picture . that picture she is my favoite because she is nice composition and great B&W . Maybe a little be too dark ?
Yes Everyone has their story close to their hearts.
Very good well thought your are good photgrapher
Bravo ! good Job !
Tfs

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