Peek a Boo

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-04-29 19:27]
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She's hiding but I love her smile. It almost says: I know I'm cute, but I don't want a photo taken....you're going to pay for this...
Hehe, very good framing and cropping, and I like the way she is looking out from behind the doorway, with her hand at the bottom with the cigarette. Good composition and balance between her hand and her face, and nice colors. The lighting coming from the right side works very well for this, and gives nice warm tones. Even though the gold color of the doorway at the left is bright compared to the other elements in the shot, I think it has some of the same hues and warm tones, so it works. I would only suggest fixing the slight tilt in the shot, especially with all those vertical lines from the door frame it makes the tilt distracting. But cool shot, very unique, TFS!
-Lara

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• sorin_m (689)
• [2007-04-30 11:54]
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un portret minunat.
mi-mi chiar place tilt-ul, da un aer parca si mai ghidus compozitiei.
felicitari modelului si autorului.
numai bine !
sorin