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Working the land
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Horatiu Tatar (HoratiuTT) (142) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Black & White |
| Date Taken: 2008-08-10 |
| Categories: Experimental |
| Exposure: f/9.0, 1/80 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2008-09-27 5:40 |
| Viewed: 374 |
| Points: 3 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| An old lady from a very small village in Bihor,working under a nice sunset. |
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(2998) - [2008-09-27 6:10]
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You show not us the sunset, you show us the work of the old lady : I like this regard on life, simply and real. Well done !
Greetings
Jean
you don't show indeed the sunset, well it's not obvious there is a sunset in the pic
in this case, a closer framing on the lady would have pleased me better (vertical? crop out the left?)... one can say this framing show more depth, but with all these dark parts in the shot, it's not easy to read the composition
regards
jc
Timing of the sunset is off. The subject and idea of showing an elderly lady who has to work hard is good but the photo does not show it well. Please look at the workshop which I did to improve the image. This is my personal opinion and I am looking forward to hear from more expiereinced Photographers.
