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Peace sign


Peace sign
Photo Information
Copyright: Monica Boros (Oni) (27)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07
Categories: Mood
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-03-29 13:03
Viewed: 674
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Picture shot near Garana village... take a stroll.
(dog from the rear like a peace sign)
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...ehm...Monica, to me it seems a distant dog on a field only...maybe i'm not so poetic...I guess a sitted dog would be better. But colours and sharpness are good: it must be a lovely place.

Best regards and, of course, welcome to TL!

Massimo

Hi Monica

Lol! And welcome to TL. I would offset the dog from the centre, using the 1/3 to 2/3 ratio.

Buna Monica,
Bine ai venit pe TL !
Nu este o poza f sugestiva, dar ai timp sa inveti. Pe TL se accepta post prelucrare, ceea ce trebuia sa faci si cu poza ta (o sa incerc un WS).
O zi buna,
Filip.

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-03-30 3:49]
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Buna Monica! Bine-ai venit pe forum! sper sa te simti bine!

peisajul e fain, titlul e excelent, o singura problema: personajul e prea centrat, de obicei se respecta anumite reguli compozitionale (incerci sa imparti spatiul pozei pe verticala si orizontala in 3 linii imaginare si in acele intersectii sau pe acele linii ar trebui plasate obiectele - nu e o regula stricta, doar orientativa)

in orice caz NU in centru, pentru ca restul pozei "moare"

asteptam noi poze!

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3563 W: 737 N: 2401] (19058)
  • [2006-03-30 4:07]

Monica, bine ai venit pe TL !!!
Deja Filip si Anca ti-au zis/aratat ce era de zis asa ca nu mai repet.

o zi buna,
v

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