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Sunset 7


Sunset 7
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Copyright: PAL CLAUDIA (pal_claudia) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 18] (157)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-21
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-08 15:16
Viewed: 75
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"Beautiful Sunset"

We’re sitting outside on the porch
Your head is softly resting on my shoulder
And our fingers are laced
And sitting on your lap
We gaze out at the countryside
As the sun sets upon it
The mixture of orange, red, and yellow
Is simply breathtaking
You tilt your head until your eyes
Are looking back at mine
Your beautiful face sets on my heart
And that’s more than
I could ever ask for
A gentle kiss rests upon your lips
As I take every moment in
The warmth of you being in my arms
Is sensuous
I pull you closer to me as
You lay your head back down on my shoulder
And there is no place that I would rather be
Than here, with you, right now
I love you today, tomorrow,
Forever…
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Nice scene here and exposure seems good to capture this cornfield silhouette against the setting sun. However the bottom part of the frame is wasted as it is just negative space and you would have been better off taking more of the sky here or shot in landscape orientation with the wider view. Hope you find this a constructive suggestion and happy shooting

cheers,

Dilshan

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 503 W: 0 N: 924] (4678)
  • [2009-10-09 6:59]

Salut Claudia,
interesant acest apus de soare cu niste culori calde si frumoase.
Vad ca ai inceput sa fii mai activa. Daca doresti sa te faci cunoscuta trebuie sa scrii mai des ca sa te cunoasca lumea.
Un Weekend placut,
Adrian

Hi Pal!

This is a great capture of the sunset. I think what I like the most is the camera position....well, I like corn too!

Have a great Friday!

Dennis

sevgili Pal,
günbatımının güzelliğinde satırlarınız..
sevgiyle kalın..

Great colors of sky, but 1/2 of pictures is black color .
Regards Zoran

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