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Sunset 5
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Copyright: PAL CLAUDIA (pal_claudia) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 18] (157)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-06
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/6.3
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-29 16:46
Viewed: 110
Points: 4
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Under the Sunset Sky
Brian Potthast

Sitting under the sunset sky
Laying around I wonder why
You value me so much more
Than any other you’ve met before
Why you feel so safe by me
And no the others that you see

Sitting under the sunset sky
I find comfort and I sigh
Knowing all is well by you
Having peace in all I do
Watching my troubles fall away
Not wanting then back any day

Sitting under the sunset sky
When you’re sad I want to cry
Feeling you’re sorrow, hurt and pain
When it’s done, all for gain
Drawing away from the past
What’s done is done and shouldn’t last

Sitting under the sunset sky
Only thing to do is deny
The comfort found when we’re alone
Feelings around us never shown
If only to live for how we feel
Soon this love would we seal

Sitting under the sunset sky
Longing for you by and by
Can’t get you off my mind
All the reasons trying to find
Thinking so hard never to know
Why you might care for me so

Sitting under the sunset sky
Hoping you won’t chose another guy
To be the one, to live the life
That good men live, without strife
To be with you is my goal
Are you the match for my soul?

Sitting under the sunset sky
To be with you when I die
Would be the best of any dream
Looking around, you see me beam
I’ve found the one out of all
Now it’s done, this task not small
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Hi Pal!

What a beautiful gray sky, perfect frame and very nice poem too.

TFS

Dennis

Claudia
Frumoasa captura, culori placute, si o nota de clasa!
Mariana

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