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bored joyfully


bored joyfully
Photo Information
Copyright: ilo lambrino (ilololo) (116)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-01
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/2.7, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-11 7:01
Viewed: 427
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
my best friend, andy
she is the one you all see in my photos
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  • Great 
  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 85] (1068)
  • [2008-09-11 7:57]

Hi ilo,

Expression showing that her really bored. Good potrait shot.

Regards,

Geoffrey Bin Ramji

  • Good 
  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 4 N: 60] (555)
  • [2008-09-11 8:15]

The technical execution and especially the lighting leave to be desired, but I like the original idea quite a bit and the title suits it very well. The harsh shadows on the wall are a problem and they would require diffuse light, bounced flash or much easier and effective, moving the subject away from the wall. The tile stove on the left should not be included in the picture.

I didn't find much here, Ilo, in terms of the shot and the intent. The note didn't reveal anything other than her name. Her face is almost totally soft and out of focus and needs some sharpness there. The light there was poor as well. The wall molding is skewed to the right making it off-balance. TFS. She's a pretty girl and needs a better way to show her off.

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