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dressed in white


dressed in white
Photo Information
Copyright: ilo lambrino (ilololo) (104)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-07-02
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.4
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-09 10:46
Viewed: 268
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Crude vibratii

pasii-ti mangaie verde iarba
fire nedemne de-a ta atingere
tradeaza emotii
vibreaza
si-ngana cu tine
canta, rad, si-n liniste-arunca suspine
frunze coboara lin spre pamant
incet adorm, incet,
purtate pe valuri de oxigen.

aur pe cer, iti topeste graba
nori picura albi pe albastrul plin de mistere
prin vine ne curg tentatii
de mana ma prinde, danseaza
si canta cu mine
patrunde-mi in minte, in gand...
flori ploua pe-al tau crestet
si crudu-ti ma-mpinge-n eden

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I like the mood and the sepia treatment of this shot. The light here is actually very, very nice - beautifully diffuse and even, and the pose of the girl is natural.

Your 'scratched image' PP creates an interesting effect.

I think the composition could be stronger; perhaps placing her less centrally in the frame, and maybe rotating it a little so she doesn't look quite so tilted?

Overall a very nice work

Rew

Hi Ilo,
nice B/W picture. Theme is nice with B/W.
Cheers, Ivan

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1906 W: 76 N: 0] (18995)
  • [2008-10-06 10:13]

HI Ilo ;)
Nice inocent feelings...TFS
Best,
J ;)

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