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another world outside


another world outside
Photo Information
Copyright: ilo lambrino (ilololo) (116)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-08
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/12 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-09 8:26
Viewed: 269
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
the photo may not be so great, i took it as i was in a theater show, and i wasn't really allowed:P
i must confess, this image fits perfectly to the play i had seen, Family M's sickness...
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Hi Ilo.

Very nice detail shot, and I think it is a pitty that the photo is darky and not so "defined". Perhaps you should try to ajust a little bit of contrast and to align the horison line for start. I would like to do a workshop but I already used my right to do 2 per day! :-)

Anyway, after I told you what I think, now I'll give you points for some refreshing view after all those landscapes, which I am using too a lot. :-)

Hope to see you soon.

Greetz.
David

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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 85] (1066)
  • [2008-10-10 7:44]

Hi Ilo,

I like the idea. Creative shot and its was well presented. The sharpness still can be improve and the noise can be reduce.

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4023)
  • [2008-10-10 11:23]

destul de msito,era mai fain sa fie inauntru lumina si in exterior intunericul sau ceva de genu sa fie kind of a scary world outside... da ideea e super si imi place f mult cum se vad frunzele...foarte fain decor

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