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The gipsy woman is well captured but I think the composition is not as good as the previous one (even if you had someone walking behind her). I don't really like the half cars we see on the left and I would have cropped them out or not include them in the original composition. I tried a crop to bring it to a square format and it was looking good. I know that you don't like to crop but I think it is sometimes necessary because it is not always possible to compose what we want with the camera format and old photographers used to do it in the darkroom. Otherwise, nice details on her face and on clothes. Well done!
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