Come along...to Me

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• shayadave (305)
• [2005-12-20 3:41]

Where is your camera description? and also any note's to this? Anyways, this is a very clear picture and filled with colors. I like it alot. I would have cropped out a little bit of the right side of the picture, not too much though just a bit. Other than that, maybe try to keep in mind of her hand next time, shot as many picture's as you can from one scene that your shooting and pick and choose the ONE which suites you best. I can't wait to see what else you have to offer. Keep it up. Happy Holidays. David

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• kitflorendo (0)
• [2005-12-20 4:19]
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I'm totally disinterested in your camera and I suspect that there are no notes because of a language dfference.
The important part is the presented image.
ShakyDave is right about cropping off the right hand side and I would take a LOT off, right back to the hair and halfway through the shoulder.
The oustretched arm is a problem and would have been better re-arranged at the time. A possible further crop up from the bottom would minimise the problem.
I would also have preferred full eye contact with this one. However, the good points are:
Very good-looking girl. Beautiful hair and stunning eyes. The background is well enough out of focus but yet another crop in from the left would take out the distracting orange flower group?
I have a version as above saved. If you would like to see, please reply. Any language.

You and this girl should appear again.

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• ola_kwiatek (9007)
• [2007-09-30 5:00]

Hi Czoka! Beautiful girl, beautiful portrait! Nice colors. Cheers!